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PsychoNerd


Hey guys, It's me PsychoNerd here and I'm a nerdy book worm who is a Brony and I write stories. I hope you like what I write and if you do then Thank you and if you don't then it's cool.

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Prequel to The Cashiers 101

When Raven decides to buy her groceries at a Mall, she thinks it's gonna be like any other day that goes by like for everypony.

But things aren't exactly gonna go the way she hoped...

What secrets are hidden in the Mall, and what tales are told by the ponies who stay there every single day... the workers... the ponies who's lives revolve around the Mall... and they harbor some truths that most ponies don't realize nor know about...

Dare relate...

Editor by the amazing EverfreePony
Cover art by HAchaosagent

Dedicated to my BSBFF (see Editor)

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Comments ( 4 )

What, no Encounter with mall security? I work as a mall guard, and I hoped there would be one... Aww...

7801135 Of course there will be Guards, this'll be a mini series! :pinkiecrazy:

Very amusing. However, a slight gripe.

When you have a line that's in a character's thoughts, Italicize the line.

‘Or you can use single quotation marks. Well, I've heard you can do this, but I see most just italicize it. I think it looks better that way.’

Anyways, besides that, this was very amusing. Rather clever too. Felt like a satire of major corporations and their employees.

I look forward to the next installment. :raritywink:

Thank you for those kind words! :pinkiehappy: and yeah :twilightsheepish: I tend to have that habit :derpytongue2: I'll work on that

Hmm... I'll consider that :pinkiesmile:

And of course :pinkiehappy:
-Psycho :rainbowwild:

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