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A reader first, a writer second.

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Sk1Tz #1 · Dec 13th, 2016 · · · 10 ·

Most of these chapters are way too short.

I wanna say, you capture Dash's voice wonderfully.


Thank you very much. RD is a fun voice to have running around in my head :rainbowlaugh:


Hmm...! I am interested in where this is going, and I like how you've fleshed it out.

Thank you! Fluttershy's voice was a little tough for me to find in the first draft of a lot of this, but once I started figuring out what she needed to say it all got a lot better.

Also, I really appreciate the comments. :raritywink:

Alright, I have to be honest here.
I had seen this story a few weeks ago but didn't bother to read it because of certain chapters that looked a bit too short. Short chapters tend to mean amateur writer.
I decided to give it a chance just because I was bored.
I'm just going to say that I was pleasantly proven wrong after reading a few chapters.
The story is well written, with the characters written properly.
The short chapters are short, but not of lack of skill or imagination, they are short because thats how they were meant to be. (or at least that's the feeling I got.)

So, anyone that came here looking for a good Raridash Fic, this is one of those.

Thank you so much.

I just read this in one sitting. I love the depth of emotion and complexity you've given these characters. Thank you for not rushing the story. :twilightsmile:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :yay:

Why is this on hiatus?

Because I won't be posting another update for a few months. I'm working on another story that's totally taken over my brain, but I still have a lot I want to do with this before it's done.

Assertive Fluttershy is hot. You go girl!

Right? Honestly, when I started writing this story I had no idea she'd be like that, but I'm kind of in love with assertive Fluttershy- or at least in love with writing that character.

Please give us updates on when you think you'll return to the story it is like....the best , no the greatest story . All three of my fave ponies, ships put togeather ... it's like dreams do come true. Don't stop for good . Please... I know you said there would be more I can't wait but I worry

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