As... off putting as this is, it's kinda... I don't know. Sweet? No, that seems like the wrong word. A weird sort of fluff. I mean, a sibling being one's first crush is hardly uncommon, but most grow out of it pretty quick for a variety of reasons. I have mixed feelings about this.
"Well it's not like you have a hand free to do this yourself," Fluttershy pointed out. "Besides, as long as I have a hand on it, I can make sure you're not trying to put it in me... "
Dunno, it seems to me Fluttershy might not be as against it as she might have made us think...
If Zephr wasn't such a skeezebag, this could have potential to be hot. But he is. So, it's more weird than anything. And I say this as a guy that enjoys some wincest.
Please don't be Fluttershy and Zephyr, please don't be Fluttershy and Zephyr... OH GOD DAMN IT! Why, Fluttershy? Why!? He doesn't deserve that, the creepy bastard.
Fluttershy groaned, then sighed and parted her thighs. "Sure, why not," she said. As Zephyr's hand returned to her stomach and quested for the waistband of her panties, she reached over, unzipped his pants, and reached inside, deftly seizing his dick and stroking her long, delicate fingers along its length.
Zephyr halted. "F-Fluttershy?!"
"Well it's not like you have a hand free to do this yourself," Fluttershy pointed out. "Besides, as long as I have a hand on it, I can make sure you're not trying to put it in me..."
And now Flutters and Zephyr enter into this weird fetish relationship where he pervs on her, she gets pissed, and she takes out her anger with acts of depravity upon him, or lets him "get it out of his system".
Is it wrong that I actually want to see a scenario where turns out that Fluttershy was recording everything that Zephyr had just said and starts using it as blackmail material?
But Zephyr is an unattractive neckbeard skeeze-lord. Plus Fluttershy wouldn’t go from “Get out of my room you sick pervert” to “sure, finger me while I jack you off”.
At no point after zephyr crawls out from under the bed was Fluttershy in character at all.
9274617 Yep ... I mean she already caught his cum stains on her stomach few times, and his skeeviness has ended up with her perpetually locking her door. But ... it's as you said "Zephyr Breeze".
I can only hope that his torment is Sunset Shimmer Approved in both scale and epicness.
9272834 Well she did say he's going to pay for it later, so he better enjoy it while he can.
I'm not sure how much I like this. I mean, I kinda dig incest (when it's fictional, I hasten to add...) as a kink. And assertive naughty Fluttershy with huge tits is always great. But Zephyr Breeze just... sucks. It was still kind of hot at the end though.
I really enjoyed this. Fluttershy being assertive and combative, Zephyr being a creeper and pervy, but the two of them coming to an understanding about it anyway.
I'd be interested to see if Fluttershy sets ground rules about when and how it's okay for him to perv on her and what she'll demand from him in exchange. Regularly getting his incest fix could be a big motivator for Zephyr to stop doing the shit that really annoys her and if they're both having fun with it... well, if nothing else, Fluttershy could get a 'massage' out it him every time this happens, at least.
I'm going to join the chorus here and say you have really hit on an amazing feel and dynamic with this chapter. I would love to see it continued expanded or anything else that means there would be more to read of this relationship. Love it!
I think you did a good job with this chapter. I love the way you write Zephyr here. It felt real and believable. It makes sense to me that Zephyr just needs some kind of outlet to hopefully keep his behavior in check. I would love to see more of this new relationship between Fluttershy and Zephyr from you.
oh
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It's sick, I know, but I kinda ship it...
Yeah.....
...I approve of this chapter. Not really sure groping and the start of a handjob count as incest, though.
...okay, not something I like the idea of...
...but still pretty hot.
I shouldn't like this.
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Goddamnit Moth.
As... off putting as this is, it's kinda... I don't know. Sweet? No, that seems like the wrong word. A weird sort of fluff. I mean, a sibling being one's first crush is hardly uncommon, but most grow out of it pretty quick for a variety of reasons. I have mixed feelings about this.
Oh... well that was unexpected...
*eye twtiching erratically*
Assertive Fluttershy is kinda hot though...
If he thinks Fluttershy is gonna make him regret this, wait until the other girls find out.
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technically? its not, its just a prelude to maybe some mutual masturbation...it only technically counts as incest if they actually have sex...
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....Oh
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That it is
How I felt after reading this chapter:
Pretty messed up that Zephyr Breeze has been harassing and assaulting Fluttershy for years and no one seems to care.
"Mom, someone was in my room last night! They ejaculated on me!"
"Oh, that was probably your brother. You should start locking your door."
Um...
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Just because it’s not intercourse doesn't mean it’s not sex.
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I know that. I was just wondering where the line for "incest" began. Nothing more.
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Ha! Jokes on all of you, incest IS my fetish!
.......Never done it though....
Dunno, it seems to me Fluttershy might not be as against it as she might have made us think...
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IMO incest porn only really works when you don't think too hard about it.
If Zephr wasn't such a skeezebag, this could have potential to be hot. But he is. So, it's more weird than anything. And I say this as a guy that enjoys some wincest.
Well I didn't expect that .
Good job keeping us guessing.
Please don't be Fluttershy and Zephyr, please don't be Fluttershy and Zephyr... OH GOD DAMN IT!
Why, Fluttershy? Why!? He doesn't deserve that, the creepy bastard.
...wasn't expecting that...
it'd be a shame if... he died, horribly.
That or Flutters whips out her giant futa dick.
Also... even if it went somewhere unexpected...
Thanks for the smut
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H-how lewd! You pervert! How could you write something like this?!
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...
... I approve. And I need more.
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This can't be the end! I want more Fluttershy wincest!
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If you can't beat them join them
This isn’t wincest
This is put it in the fucking bincest
Oh my
And now Flutters and Zephyr enter into this weird fetish relationship where he pervs on her, she gets pissed, and she takes out her anger with acts of depravity upon him, or lets him "get it out of his system".
Why....how.......why did the escalation seem natural? I actually believe it.
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i did say that it was only technically not incest...i never said anything about it not being sex...
I hope in part 4 she bites his dick off
Is it wrong that I actually want to see a scenario where turns out that Fluttershy was recording everything that Zephyr had just said and starts using it as blackmail material?
You damn pervert!!!
Give us MORE!!
But Zephyr is an unattractive neckbeard skeeze-lord. Plus Fluttershy wouldn’t go from “Get out of my room you sick pervert” to “sure, finger me while I jack you off”.
At no point after zephyr crawls out from under the bed was Fluttershy in character at all.
In one hoof, Incest is Wincest... but in the other, Zephyr Breeze...
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Yep ... I mean she already caught his cum stains on her stomach few times, and his skeeviness has ended up with her perpetually locking her door. But ... it's as you said "Zephyr Breeze".
I can only hope that his torment is Sunset Shimmer Approved in both scale and epicness.
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Well she did say he's going to pay for it later, so he better enjoy it while he can.
I'm not sure how much I like this. I mean, I kinda dig incest (when it's fictional, I hasten to add...) as a kink. And assertive naughty Fluttershy with huge tits is always great. But Zephyr Breeze just... sucks.
It was still kind of hot at the end though.
I really enjoyed this. Fluttershy being assertive and combative, Zephyr being a creeper and pervy, but the two of them coming to an understanding about it anyway.
I'd be interested to see if Fluttershy sets ground rules about when and how it's okay for him to perv on her and what she'll demand from him in exchange. Regularly getting his incest fix could be a big motivator for Zephyr to stop doing the shit that really annoys her and if they're both having fun with it... well, if nothing else, Fluttershy could get a 'massage' out it him every time this happens, at least.
I'd really enjoy seeing where this goes.
I'm going to join the chorus here and say you have really hit on an amazing feel and dynamic with this chapter. I would love to see it continued expanded or anything else that means there would be more to read of this relationship. Love it!
I think you did a good job with this chapter. I love the way you write Zephyr here. It felt real and believable. It makes sense to me that Zephyr just needs some kind of outlet to hopefully keep his behavior in check. I would love to see more of this new relationship between Fluttershy and Zephyr from you.
Well, that sort of flipped the dynamic you have for these two on its head...I actually kind of feel for Zephyr...almost Interesting though
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Heh, thanks. :D, my profile says that too, :P
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Yup, :), but those names tho.....
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AND YOUR PROFILE PICTURE! XD absolutely GLORIOUS!