Kind of feel this is going way beyond what's funny. I mean I know Rainbow is a little nuts and out there but I don't think she'd do this, but I don't know.
Though man this would be awkward as HELL, I mean can you imagine being in this situation, I sure as hell can't. Still it was kind of funny, up until the rape stuff that I feel was a bit much. I know you warned about it but still seemed to go a little far.
Why, why, why are these girls friends with Rainbow again? She is so close to being able to be classified as a pervert that she would be banned from most places.
Poor Twilight, she really doesn't seem to be handling this well. I think the poor thing may be a bit traumatized. Also, Sunset is really open-minded, allowing her 'boyfriend' to fondle her while he's getting sucked by another girl. Honestly, this amazes me.
Anyone else picturing something out of Inside Out going on inside Flash head, like:
Purple one: Is this really happening? Red one: Shhhh you'll break the spell. *Unzips pants and begins to spank the monkey* Everyone else stares. Red: Don't you judge me.
This was actually pretty hot as a chapter. Depraved nymphomaniac Dash and nymphos-in-denial EQG Harmony Crew winds up being kind of fun. Though I still hate Brad, I just sort of imagined him as 'Generic Guy #3'.
Sounds like it made you feel uncomfortable. But remember, just because something is not what you're okay with doesn't make it objectively an issue with the writing, so try not to present it as criticism of the story itself, and put it across as an opinion.
8031032 okayh, fine, but still that's my reaction. This was pretty raunchy Also I can't help that Jon has some of the best reactions ever. Also is this is the about the Jon-Nazi thing I think someone's just spread shit.
Flash waved a hand dismissively. "It's no big deal," he said. "Honestly, I'm not looking to be in a band or make it big or anything like that. I know I'm not good enough for all that, and fame isn't all it's cracked up to be. If I can get steady work as a session artist, that's good enough for me, and the recording studios always need session players."
Fair enough.
Sunset rolled her eyes. "Rainbow Dash is a pervert," she said.
Big shock.
"Nah, I just like watchin' girls get fucked," Rainbow said dismissively. "It's way hot."
You're not wrong.
"Yeah but Zeph is a douchebag," Rainbow said. "Flash is cool. And awkward. And has the hots for at least three of us."
She has a point. Flash is somewhat bland at worst. Also, who's number 3? Sunset and Twilight are obvious, but, who's 3? I'm going to guess Rarity or Fluttershy.
"Just Fluttershy, then?" Sunset said with a smirk. "You did say you thought about her giving you head."
That answers that.
"Oh, this will not end well," Sunset said, pinching the bridge of her nose.
I highly disagree.
"This is not okay," Fluttershy squeaked, her face burning scarlet. "This is not okay."
You CAN leave.
"If anyone leaves, I'm recording the whole thing and posting it to MyStable," Pinkie said suddenly.
Whoah now, that's a bit too far.
"I just...I don't wanna risk getting you all mad at me and maybe losing some cool friends over some stupid horny bet!" Flash declared.
Smart move.
Flash blinked. "You and...you and Big Mac? What? That's just wrong," he said.
He gets it. And aside from the ethical and moral implications, incest usually leads to the child of said incest having a lot of genetic problems.
"Hmm," Rainbow mused. "Yeah, I can see it."
Hm, yup, agreed.
"Oh, absolutely," Flash said. "I mean, anal is at least fifth date, right?" He laughed nervously.
I'm guessing, but wouldn't know.
Rarity blinked. "I'm not entirely sure how to take that," she said. "Up the butt, of course!" Pinkie said, giggling and snorting.
Sunset shook her head. "No, you gotta share that one. That's...that's like the craziest thing I've ever...man..."
Eh?
"Don't you all have dark impulses sometimes you'd never really act on? Like...shoplifting or beating the crap out of somebody?"
Yup.
"Well...yes," Fluttershy admitted. "I..." She ducked her head. "I often fantasize about taking Mom's hedge clippers to Zephyr's, umm...penis."
*wince*
"But he ogles my body and he's my brother and that's wrong!" Fluttershy insisted.
You are entirely correct.
"I feel beside myself with amazement!" Trixie said.
"You win," Rainbow said as she worked Flash's already-hard dick free of his underwear and began slowly stroking it with her right hand. "My pussy's so wet right now we're gonna need to shampoo that couch." The girls who had been sitting with her wrinkled their noses and discreetly moved to other seats.
... I have nothing clever to say to that.
"Oh, and...that thing you wanted to do with me? That, umm...boob thing?" She flushed. "Maybe...up in my room later?"
Flash Sentry you lucky son of a bitch.
Twilight facepalmed. "You girls are crazy," she moaned.
"Well I don't know!" Flash exploded, throwing up his hands. "I mean, what do you even want from me? Other than the whole blowjob thing, the only thing I ever thought about Fluttershy was how hot she'd look in a bikini and how great her tits are!" He paused, his face going pale. "Uhh..."
"Oh...my," Fluttershy said, shifting in her seat. "Umm...thank you?" After an awkward pause, she added, "What...what kind of bikini?"
Well okay then, we strike agai-
"Well...yes," Fluttershy admitted. "I..." She ducked her head. "I often fantasize about taking Mom's hedge clippers to Zephyr's, umm...penis."
Flash cringed.
"But he ogles my body and he's my brother and that's wrong!" Fluttershy insisted.
Um... that's actually terrifying... um, but that's at least-
"I'll be right back with some wet wipes for you, Flash," she said. After an awkward pause, she added, "Oh, and...that thing you wanted to do with me? That, umm...boob thing?" She flushed. "Maybe...up in my room later?"
Goddamn it, this isn't gonna end until I write a story about this, is it? I mean, a story where Fluttershy deals with having a crush on Flash Sentry. You make the Bradinator actually likable, and that's amazing.
But um... can we see the titfuck? Like, seriously, I wanna see that.
That was really uncomfortable and cringe-worthy...I mean damn, Rainbow, I get that it's all fun and games but disregarding your friends' discomfort for your own fun is messed up.
But then again this is a EQG fic and it got better as it went along, what with the girls playing along and stuff. So yeah, good chapter
Flash is a lucky chick magnet. Not only is he getting back with Sunset, he got a blowjob from Rainbow and will get to do some stuff with Pinkie and Fluttershy next time too. The Flash x Trixie ship is a weird one I see sometimes but that fantasy was entertaining. I want to here what Flash wants to do with Twilight personally, since that's my favorite.
Man, maybe the internet has just desensitized me a bit too much, but that fantasy wasn't even that bad. I mean, yeah it's rapey, but it was just so gosh darned silly, both in tone and in the base absurdity of making a magic dissection 'real' and then banging someone's disembodied lower half, it was hard to be offended by it. With the intensity of the warning you led off with, I was expecting, like....I don't even know, someone having a fantasy about being raped themselves maybe? And not in such a silly and absurd fashion?
I'm... surprisingly okay with Flash being caught at the center of the Humane 7's sexy shenanigans. It must be the fact that your version has an actual personality.
Tune In Next Time On Flash's Fantasy Channel For The Exciting Conclusion: "Rainbow Dash vs. The Entire Chrystal Prep Football Team"
*squish* Ohshit. Uh, Flutters? I may need to borrow another another pair of underpants. Where should I put this one?
Errr... You know what? You can keep it.
Allright, score! Didn't think this was the way I'd end up getting one of Fluttershy's undies, but I'll take it! Hey, come to think of it, doesn't this mean that I technically got into Flutters' panties? Twice!
Holy....WOW! This. WAS. INTENSE!!!!!!! Hahaha awesome job!
This is amazing I love it keep up the good work
Enter serial anal rapist Ben Dover.
Ah, the glorious return of the powdered sugar donut.
And kinda disappointed we didn't get anything about Twilight (either one) and pony play.
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You both should look up image number 332260 on derpibooru. (Or better yet, don't.)
As for the story... well, I think both sides of this picture sum it up.
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That said, modularity (that is, dismemberment without blood or death) is a far underappreciated thing.
8030717 The reason I am laughing hard enough to crack my ribs is that I am eating some powdered donuts when I read this!
Whoa.....hot and steamy!
Kind of feel this is going way beyond what's funny. I mean I know Rainbow is a little nuts and out there but I don't think she'd do this, but I don't know.
Though man this would be awkward as HELL, I mean can you imagine being in this situation, I sure as hell can't. Still it was kind of funny, up until the rape stuff that I feel was a bit much. I know you warned about it but still seemed to go a little far.
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It's been pretty well established that this Rainbow Dash is a HUGE pervert.
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Yeah but still.
This was hilarious...
Though, I'll have to admit, I've personally never had a sexual fantasy...ever.
I also don't get the powdered donut line, and I'd actually like that to be explained to me.
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The idea is, that's why Rarity's butthole resembles.
I... Just... Wow.
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Looking forward to the next one.
8030842 So it's white with a hole in the middle?
Because given Rarity's color scheme, it makes sense.
Sweet Celestia, Fluttershy. That is never the answer.
Why, why, why are these girls friends with Rainbow again? She is so close to being able to be classified as a pervert that she would be banned from most places.
Poor Twilight, she really doesn't seem to be handling this well. I think the poor thing may be a bit traumatized. Also, Sunset is really open-minded, allowing her 'boyfriend' to fondle her while he's getting sucked by another girl. Honestly, this amazes me.
got to admit, i actually liked the Trixie part...
What just happened!?
Anyone else picturing something out of Inside Out going on inside Flash head, like:
Purple one: Is this really happening?
Red one: Shhhh you'll break the spell. *Unzips pants and begins to spank the monkey*
Everyone else stares.
Red: Don't you judge me.
This was actually pretty hot as a chapter. Depraved nymphomaniac Dash and nymphos-in-denial EQG Harmony Crew winds up being kind of fun. Though I still hate Brad, I just sort of imagined him as 'Generic Guy #3'.
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Sounds like it made you feel uncomfortable. But remember, just because something is not what you're okay with doesn't make it objectively an issue with the writing, so try not to present it as criticism of the story itself, and put it across as an opinion.
8030981 Please do not use Jontron videos to comment on my stories.
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8031032 okayh, fine, but still that's my reaction. This was pretty raunchy
Also I can't help that Jon has some of the best reactions ever. Also is this is the about the Jon-Nazi thing I think someone's just spread shit.
At least Pinkie didn't say about Flash having a five-way with her and her sisters.
8031046 It has nothing to do with that. I just can't stand Jontron and never could and I'm sick of seeing his face in my comments sections.
8031050 ...Well okay, fair point. He is an over-used meme to begin with sooooooo.... no hard feelings?
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He really did that shit? wowwww
8031059 No hard feelings.
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I would appreciate not down voting these comments. I posted jontron, and he doesn't like it, my mistake honest. If anyone should be down voted it's me
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Oh come on, that's not explicitly NSFW. Also, it's fucking hilarious, thanks for the suggestion.
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That was what I was aiming for ultimately. I don't have a problem with it per say story wise, though I don't know just my thoughts is all.
Huh. Have had i similar fantasy years ago as flash w Trixie only with the ability to summon said body areas to myself from pictures.
The whole thing was a fun read but it's the side comments from each girl that makes this hilarious.
8030799 Kinky.
Can we PLEASE get a part 2 for this chapter? I really wanna see what happens.
8031277 It's labeled Part I for a REASON.
8031295 I didn't notice that. Nice.
And this is why a gentleman never discusses his fantasies until the lady insists.
In my opinion, Flash should ask Sunset to come watch what he does with Fluttershy. Not going behind her back, and all that.
Fair enough.
Big shock.
You're not wrong.
She has a point. Flash is somewhat bland at worst. Also, who's number 3? Sunset and Twilight are obvious, but, who's 3? I'm going to guess Rarity or Fluttershy.
That answers that.
I highly disagree.
You CAN leave.
Whoah now, that's a bit too far.
Smart move.
He gets it. And aside from the ethical and moral implications, incest usually leads to the child of said incest having a lot of genetic problems.
Hm, yup, agreed.
I'm guessing, but wouldn't know.
Eh?
Yup.
*wince*
You are entirely correct.
... I have nothing clever to say to that.
Flash Sentry you lucky son of a bitch.
And it is hilarious.
Well okay then, we strike agai-
Um... that's actually terrifying... um, but that's at least-
Goddamn it, this isn't gonna end until I write a story about this, is it? I mean, a story where Fluttershy deals with having a crush on Flash Sentry. You make the Bradinator actually likable, and that's amazing.
But um... can we see the titfuck? Like, seriously, I wanna see that.
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Making Flash likeable isn't all that difficult, really. Just take his character from what we know so far: Well-meaning but kinda dorky. Done.
Very nice. And I'm rather curious to see what Sunset might see in Rainbow's head regarding her "sick" interests.
That was really uncomfortable and cringe-worthy...I mean damn, Rainbow, I get that it's all fun and games but disregarding your friends' discomfort for your own fun is messed up.
But then again this is a EQG fic and it got better as it went along, what with the girls playing along and stuff. So yeah, good chapter
Flash is a lucky chick magnet. Not only is he getting back with Sunset, he got a blowjob from Rainbow and will get to do some stuff with Pinkie and Fluttershy next time too. The Flash x Trixie ship is a weird one I see sometimes but that fantasy was entertaining. I want to here what Flash wants to do with Twilight personally, since that's my favorite.
*stares blankley*
...
*takes a deep breath*
Well, that happened.
My body is ready now, part 2 please.
Man, maybe the internet has just desensitized me a bit too much, but that fantasy wasn't even that bad. I mean, yeah it's rapey, but it was just so gosh darned silly, both in tone and in the base absurdity of making a magic dissection 'real' and then banging someone's disembodied lower half, it was hard to be offended by it. With the intensity of the warning you led off with, I was expecting, like....I don't even know, someone having a fantasy about being raped themselves maybe? And not in such a silly and absurd fashion?
Anyway, overstated content warnings aside, funny stuff.
I'm... surprisingly okay with Flash being caught at the center of the Humane 7's sexy shenanigans. It must be the fact that your version has an actual personality.
Tune In Next Time On
Flash's Fantasy Channel
For The Exciting Conclusion:
"Rainbow Dash vs. The Entire Chrystal Prep Football Team"
*squish* Ohshit. Uh, Flutters? I may need to borrow another another pair of underpants. Where should I put this one?
Errr... You know what? You can keep it.
Allright, score! Didn't think this was the way I'd end up getting one of Fluttershy's undies, but I'll take it! Hey, come to think of it, doesn't this mean that I technically got into Flutters' panties? Twice!