Twilight Sparkle decides to take a break from being co-ruler of Equestria, and travels through the portal to see Sunset Shimmer and her friends again. However, she finds the world that once was is gone. It is now a world of survival and insanity.
Sunset Shimmer, accompanied by her friend Thunder Bolt, has lived in this world for the past five years. Twilight must learn the new rules for survival if she hopes to make it back home.
This is a crossover with Mad Max: Fury Road, I'd recommend watching that movie before reading this. Otherwise, creative criticism is appreciated
Also, starting with Chapter 5 and forward, this story is being editing by ransom username. So I thank him for his help on this.
Chapters (7)
Twilight should really stop heaving herself all over the place. That's her real problem. Well, that and the impending brutal rape orgy.
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I'll try to not use that word anymore.
Jawsnapper....Something tells me his dream will come true, thou in the least way expected.
awesome chapter and can't wait for more. I'm ahuge fan of Fury road and brought the movie when it came to dvd.
7518645 Thanks.
So, I resolved an issue where the words were made bold. Got that taken care of.
So he the rogue warboy, and he facing REality, he tire of working for Sombra, and he wants freedom...Heh.
Nice twist, I read rogue war boy but was surprised who it was.
LOL nice can't wait for more.
7519718 Yeah, things are gonna get crazy in the future!
(No pun intended)
I'm liking this so far. Something's telling me that this inspired Fallout 1.
7520548 This is actually a crossover with Mad Max: Fury Road.
7520461 WITNESS ME!
7521050 Oh.
when i read the title, i thought it was gonna be a Fallout: Equestria story
7522199 Nope. I haven't even read Fallout: Equestria!
Will we find out what happen to the rest fo the girls?
7524272 Eventually, sometime in the future.
you seriously need an editor
7524633 That bad, huh? Alright, I'll get on that.
7524633 What part of the story do you think needs adjustments?
7523075 neither have i, but it is on my "read later" list
7524633 Though, if you do read ahead, my writing does get better. That first chapter was written way back when I first started writing. Believe me, know that the first chapter isn't my best work. But it does get better as you go along.
Somehow Violet and Midnight kinda represents the a good twily and bad twily...
Oh!! I cant wait for Sunset to have some simple shotgun diplomacy when she hear Twily is in the citadel.
7526775 Don't worry, there's going to be a lot of that!
Is the Immortan guy Discord or Sombra? No offense, but it seems like you can't decide.
7527975 Huh? The main antagonist is Immortan Sombra, not sure where getting Discord from...
I am eager to see more.
7527975 Wait. I think I know what happened. In the original draft of this story, Immortan Sombra was supposed to be Immortan Discord’s originally. But I changed it because I felt Like the Discord’s we know from the show wouldn't act the same way he did in the story.
Would you mind telling me where you saw the mistake so that I can fix it?
Also, what's Immortan Discord look like?
7530228 He's not Discord, he's Sombra.
Hello.
It seems like you need an editor.
Would you like some help with that?
□ Yes, contact ransom username
□ No, I don't need an editor
□ No, I already have an editor
7532977 Yes, contact random user.
7532989 no, No, NO!
IT'S ransom.
Still, k.
7532992 Pffff...
Jeez, read that username completely wrong!
ransom username... okay, got it
Twilight is dead? Then who are we seeing right now?
Changelings?
I may be the proofreader but I don't know everything. What I suspect is that the mirror had a malfunction that brought Twilight to this world instead of the normal EqG
7542330 I guess we'll find out...
7542351 I already am excited to see more.
I liked this chapter.
Stay strong
Speedy
"Love it, 10/10 would recommend"
-IGN
Nice one. Can't wait for the next!
*looks around *
Please let me in the story!
Please.....
7542330 I think Sunset meant Sci-Twi A,K,a the human Twilight Sparkle
8046514 You would be right.
Nice! Good new chapter
This story's good as far as I'm concerned. But if I may make one small suggestion, I would throw a few more old-fashioned weapons into the mix for a more "Mad Max-ish" feel, including crossbows, large melee weapons (both authentic and makeshift) and of course the thundersticks from Fury Road. Just a suggestion; feel free to disregard it.
8050758 Actually, Sunset Shimmer's shotgun and pistol are World War ! era. And Thunder's Auto Mag is 80's era. But, I think adding more blunt weapons as you suggested would be a good idea. Thanks.
Shouldn't it be "Chapter 7" in the title? I mean.... it's kinda obvious that something went wrong there.
Didn't see anything other than that
8060734 Thanks, I fixed it.
8066603 Thanks! I'll think about it.
i am pleased
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Fanks