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Rainbow Spectrum

I'm one of the people who knows every song in the show, all the latest news in the fandom, and never misses an episode. Is that weird?

Rainbow Spectrum Joined 27th Jun, 2016 · Offline

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Shortly after Zephyr Breeze graduates from mane therapy training, Fluttershy consults Rainbow Dash and asks if she can keep an eye on Zephyr. Follow Rainbow as she deals with Zephyr and all his antics on her weekly visits!

Shout out to MarioDS01 for letting me use the idea!
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Incomplete Published: Aug 19th, 2016 Download
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Amethyst_Dawn
Amethyst_Dawn #2 · Aug 19th, 2016 · · · Chapter 1: "Just Pick a House!" ·
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Huh, it's nice, I like it!

The only error I see- if you don't mind my saying -is this:

and he wanted to stay in Ponyville a bit more (mostly because he didn't have anywhere to stay).

I would strongly advise against using parentheses in here, maybe separate it as it's own sentence?

But, yeah: this is good. :twilightsmile:

Rainbow Spectrum
Rainbow Spectrum #3 · Aug 19th, 2016 · · · Chapter 1: "Just Pick a House!" ·
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7494950 yeah, you're right, I'll be sure to fix it!

Amethyst_Dawn
Amethyst_Dawn #5 · Aug 19th, 2016 · · 1 · Chapter 1: "Just Pick a House!" ·
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7495116
Hey, leave her alone! She's entitled to her preferred ships, just like you. :ajbemused:

Rainbow87dash
Rainbow87dash #6 · Aug 19th, 2016 · · · Chapter 1: "Just Pick a House!" ·
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7495163 Oh God a Flashlight shipper, I'm going to leave before I lose my lunch.

Amethyst_Dawn
Amethyst_Dawn #7 · Aug 19th, 2016 · · · Chapter 1: "Just Pick a House!" ·
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7495251
Yeah, that's about the reaction I'd expect. :rainbowlaugh:

LunaoftheNight
LunaoftheNight #8 · Aug 20th, 2016 · · · Chapter 1: "Just Pick a House!" ·
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This is good, don't feel bad by the dislikes!

typervader
typervader #9 · Aug 20th, 2016 · · · Chapter 1: "Just Pick a House!" ·
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Even if I hate shipping, I won't hate on your story Rainbow.

Amethyst_Dawn
Amethyst_Dawn #10 · Aug 22nd, 2016 · · · Chapter 2: "Could I ask a favor?" ·
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Not bad, Spec! I'm certainly looking forward to the next chapter. :twilightsmile:

Cocoa Flurry
Cocoa Flurry #12 · Aug 31st, 2016 · · · Chapter 2: "Could I ask a favor?" ·
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Can't wait to see where this goes! Nice job so far!

The Great Derpsby
The Great Derpsby #13 · Sep 1st, 2016 · · · Chapter 2: "Could I ask a favor?" ·
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Interesting. I'm curious to see where this goes.

Rainbow Spectrum
Rainbow Spectrum #15 · Sep 11th, 2016 · · · Chapter 2: "Could I ask a favor?" ·
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7552434 I am doing more lol, I was busy this weekend and most of last week, I haven't really had much time to write, but I am hoping to get back in the swing of things!

Startech9264
Startech9264 #16 · Sep 11th, 2016 · · · Chapter 2: "Could I ask a favor?" ·
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Yay:yay: even tho I hate this ship or do I , I don't even know myself

Rainbow Spectrum
Rainbow Spectrum #17 · Sep 11th, 2016 · · · Chapter 2: "Could I ask a favor?" ·
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7556435 :rainbowlaugh: i shall pull you into the world of ZephyrDash!!!!!
(Or RainbowBreeze, I don't know which name I prefer myself.)

Startech9264
Startech9264 #18 · Sep 11th, 2016 · · · Chapter 2: "Could I ask a favor?" ·
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I prefer zephyrdash oh no I've even picked a ship name its appleshy all over again :applecry:

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