Database analyst and report developer, spend time on horseback, live in NC
When he finds himself in the MLP world on yet another assignment from the Authorities, Benjamin soon realizes he not only has to survive but to navigate the complex Royal Court, make friends, influence ponies and learn as much as he can as fast he as can. He never expected to fall in love, become a mage or end up caring for the inhabitants as much as he does.
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I purused the most recent story and was slightly lost as well as worried that this character was a bit too clean cut. Gonna read the first part and see what I see.
Anything I should know going in?
I know, the Gary Stu Effect and so on. Try the rest of the story, particularly Part 3. I welcome any suggestions.
I like the story, and I know it would be hard but I think you would get more views/likes if you expanded this chapter in to around three or four long chapters, at the moment it feels like I am reading a recording, but there is some areas where if you use character development more the feels would be heart shattering.
Good story btw.
7746198 Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. Yes, I wrote this as a novel and did have some trouble parsing it out.
I wonder why this story has not been recognized, I certainly enjoyed it.
I shall recommend it.
7746494 Thank you very much, Shadow of Doubt. I'm glad you enjoyed it.