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As long as my boy blueblood isn't bashed I'm liking this story. Getting real tired of displaced.
I don't know who to root for.
I want Guts to be his badass self, but the ponies, from what I see, are treating Casca allright, honestly she's better off with them than in constant danger in Midland(judging from first impressions at least) but fuck, I know Guts is still gonna flip his shit when he finds out.
I'm very interested in seeing how this progresses.
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I'm still not sure where the story will lead. I'm open to suggestions to improve the scenario
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7451945 Dude you KNOW he's going to be a Dumbass, he's going to be all High and Mighty, he's going to think he can Say and Do anything that is "Lesser" than him and it going to get Him Killed. For that's the end of it and we will move on. Sure it can get stretched out but he will do Something and he will die.
7452716 that's the fandom's personality for him. Mlp friends forever 26# is the Blueblood I've come to know and love.
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7452889 I'm Speaking MORE on the First actions and Mindset done in Season 1, But as we don't know at with time in the Story it is the Default BlueBlood is the Gala BlueBlood. After that Moment he 'can' change but before it he has no reason too.
His "Depiction in the series" puts him as Heavily Selfish, Heavily Arrogant and ONLY cares for his wants and wanting others to reject what he doesn't like!
This is he's personality Before the Fandom enhanced it to stupid levels, I don't disagree with anyone's character view so I can only wait and see how the Author writes their Story.
Equestria is about to see a ton of bloodshed.
7452974 we can only wait and see.
Not a bad start but you several times misspelled "witch" as "which" when refering to Shierke.
1st off don't just make this non existent like the first and only berserk MLP cross fic PLEASE! I thought about this a bit and I feel either A guts looking like a traditional baddie from there view and casca having become scared of him without others around it would take love butt knowing what was really in their hearts despite whatever shenanigans and misinterpretations happen to grasp he has good intentions. Though I feel it would take a long time for something like that to developed. Shorter way to get in good terms while being badass he would meet one or more mane 6 in the woods then something like an encounter with changelings diamond dogs or what have you to get started before throwing in your main antagonist at some point. Just throwing out a couple possible ideas since you asked for potential ideas to add
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Thanks, I'll correct them if I think about it
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Don't worry, I know my fic is not the first about Berserk, I was only complaining because the only ones I could find where canceled or with Guts turned pony.
Thank you for your suggestions, I'm not quite decided about how I will write what happens next but I'll take in consideration your advice
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7453120 yeah noticed that too but can't help but feel autocorrect was involved heavily lol
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Let's just say that typing at 2 am and not being a native english speaker don't really help my case
What is this? a crossover that is not Displaced? are the ledgends true?
(not hating on those Displaced fics or those that like them. its just a joke.)
7455078 berserk
7462492 I know what beserk is. It was just a joke abaut the amaunt of displaced fics lately.
Give me this...give me this now
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Unfortunately, we will have to wait, I started to write a bit because I was bored and published the chapter while I was in the "zone". I soon realized I didn't think about the story in depth, only the major points
Soooo to try to fix this mess, I'll need a bit of time. I also didn't realize how hard it would be to write a crossover, the characters already have their personalities and abilities so I can't really modify them as I want.
The biggest part I want to be careful of is I don't want to simply do some bad fanservice. It's my first story and I didn't really write before, especially in english so I have problems about how writing a good dialogue or a good action scene. I'm always afraid that the pace is too fast or the dialogue is flat, I hope I'll be able to do better for the next chapter, but I'm always happy when I get some feedback
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7514538 yeah it'll be an undertaking , maybe taking notes on characters will help.
Take notes on what they're like and what they can do then just try to implement it into the seen...idk but I like the story
WOW this actually looks good! We need more! No rush tho
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Done.
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Excellent...
You did good kid...you did good ;-;
twilight is so gonna die because of this mode
It's good! Not to fast and not to slow. Keep this work up!
Maybe look at your grammar. Some words are misspelled and you should check your sentence flow.
good job, save for a few minor grammar mistakes, i recommend getting someone to edit it before posting, but sweet job after all, this will help sate my berserk cravings now that the anime ended....spring 2017 WHEEEEEEEEEE.
P.S. just had the most unholy of the craziest ideas... doom guy meets gatts.......
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Who's Doom Guy ? I don't watch the anime, I only read the manga so if it's a character maybe the name is different.
7579719 go play doom
a little visual aid here
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I see... I must say the idea is interesting but unfortunately, it will not happen in that story
7579773 is ok it was just an interesting idea
I can't wait until Guts meets Fluttershy. That should be a very interesting conversation
7579883 I already have an idea on how it will happen
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Good job on the transfer of Guts to Eques!!
I love the way you portray Guts world.
Please continue
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Thanks for your comment, feedback is always appreciated
I'm sorry for taking so long at writing, I'm never happy with my work so it's difficult for me to decide if the new chapter is good enough to be published. But don't worry, I intend to continue the adventures of Gut in Equestria, I know the feel when you start to like a story and then realized the author will never work on itever again, I will try not to do that
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Please don't let this story die!
Keep going... At your own phase of course.
7580077 this is how i feel when i see this story m.memegen.com/87crpe.jpg ands2.quickmeme.com/img/fa/fae2e5b8606d8ee004e6e3883376de6ebb087e8104abcf21b964134f3b15e965.jpg icymisg.files.wordpress.com/2015/08/puss-in-boots.jpg?w=634
YEEEEEEEEESSSSSS
One story at a time you could do it a bit between busts of inspiration for this and publish it if you feel you can get something going
Sounds like a good time.
I can imagine Guts going ballistic over slavers... especially if those slavers touched a hair on Casca's head. I also say that iron is more durable than gold when it comes to weapons and armor. There's a reason why gold is one of the softest metals in the periodic table, after all.
FINALY THANK YOU !!!!!
season 2 of the anime also started
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Since no one else has done it yet...
More of this please!