Guts is sent to Equestria by the Kushan sorcerer. Casca followed soon after but she appeared in a place where Guts might have a hard time retrieving her. And this place is the castle in Canterlot. Will he get here peacefully ? Or not ?
I want Guts to be his badass self, but the ponies, from what I see, are treating Casca allright, honestly she's better off with them than in constant danger in Midland(judging from first impressions at least) but fuck, I know Guts is still gonna flip his shit when he finds out.
I'm very interested in seeing how this progresses.
7451945 Dude you KNOW he's going to be a Dumbass, he's going to be all High and Mighty, he's going to think he can Say and Do anything that is "Lesser" than him and it going to get Him Killed. For that's the end of it and we will move on. Sure it can get stretched out but he will do Something and he will die.
7452889 I'm Speaking MORE on the First actions and Mindset done in Season 1, But as we don't know at with time in the Story it is the Default BlueBlood is the Gala BlueBlood. After that Moment he 'can' change but before it he has no reason too.
His "Depiction in the series" puts him as Heavily Selfish, Heavily Arrogant and ONLY cares for his wants and wanting others to reject what he doesn't like!
This is he's personality Before the Fandom enhanced it to stupid levels, I don't disagree with anyone's character view so I can only wait and see how the Author writes their Story.
1st off don't just make this non existent like the first and only berserk MLP cross fic PLEASE! I thought about this a bit and I feel either A guts looking like a traditional baddie from there view and casca having become scared of him without others around it would take love butt knowing what was really in their hearts despite whatever shenanigans and misinterpretations happen to grasp he has good intentions. Though I feel it would take a long time for something like that to developed. Shorter way to get in good terms while being badass he would meet one or more mane 6 in the woods then something like an encounter with changelings diamond dogs or what have you to get started before throwing in your main antagonist at some point. Just throwing out a couple possible ideas since you asked for potential ideas to add
7453120 Thanks, I'll correct them if I think about it .
7453129 Don't worry, I know my fic is not the first about Berserk, I was only complaining because the only ones I could find where canceled or with Guts turned pony.
Thank you for your suggestions, I'm not quite decided about how I will write what happens next but I'll take in consideration your advice .
7512375 Unfortunately, we will have to wait, I started to write a bit because I was bored and published the chapter while I was in the "zone". I soon realized I didn't think about the story in depth, only the major points .
Soooo to try to fix this mess, I'll need a bit of time. I also didn't realize how hard it would be to write a crossover, the characters already have their personalities and abilities so I can't really modify them as I want.
The biggest part I want to be careful of is I don't want to simply do some bad fanservice. It's my first story and I didn't really write before, especially in english so I have problems about how writing a good dialogue or a good action scene. I'm always afraid that the pace is too fast or the dialogue is flat, I hope I'll be able to do better for the next chapter, but I'm always happy when I get some feedback .
7514538 yeah it'll be an undertaking , maybe taking notes on characters will help. Take notes on what they're like and what they can do then just try to implement it into the seen...idk but I like the story
As long as my boy blueblood isn't bashed I'm liking this story. Getting real tired of displaced.
I don't know who to root for.
I want Guts to be his badass self, but the ponies, from what I see, are treating Casca allright, honestly she's better off with them than in constant danger in Midland(judging from first impressions at least) but fuck, I know Guts is still gonna flip his shit when he finds out.
I'm very interested in seeing how this progresses.
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I'm still not sure where the story will lead. I'm open to suggestions to improve the scenario .
7451945 Dude you KNOW he's going to be a Dumbass, he's going to be all High and Mighty, he's going to think he can Say and Do anything that is "Lesser" than him and it going to get Him Killed. For that's the end of it and we will move on. Sure it can get stretched out but he will do Something and he will die.
7452716 that's the fandom's personality for him. Mlp friends forever 26# is the Blueblood I've come to know and love.
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7452889 I'm Speaking MORE on the First actions and Mindset done in Season 1, But as we don't know at with time in the Story it is the Default BlueBlood is the Gala BlueBlood. After that Moment he 'can' change but before it he has no reason too.
His "Depiction in the series" puts him as Heavily Selfish, Heavily Arrogant and ONLY cares for his wants and wanting others to reject what he doesn't like!
This is he's personality Before the Fandom enhanced it to stupid levels, I don't disagree with anyone's character view so I can only wait and see how the Author writes their Story.
Equestria is about to see a ton of bloodshed.
7452974 we can only wait and see.
Not a bad start but you several times misspelled "witch" as "which" when refering to Shierke.
1st off don't just make this non existent like the first and only berserk MLP cross fic PLEASE! I thought about this a bit and I feel either A guts looking like a traditional baddie from there view and casca having become scared of him without others around it would take love butt knowing what was really in their hearts despite whatever shenanigans and misinterpretations happen to grasp he has good intentions. Though I feel it would take a long time for something like that to developed. Shorter way to get in good terms while being badass he would meet one or more mane 6 in the woods then something like an encounter with changelings diamond dogs or what have you to get started before throwing in your main antagonist at some point. Just throwing out a couple possible ideas since you asked for potential ideas to add
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Thanks, I'll correct them if I think about it .
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Don't worry, I know my fic is not the first about Berserk, I was only complaining because the only ones I could find where canceled or with Guts turned pony.
Thank you for your suggestions, I'm not quite decided about how I will write what happens next but I'll take in consideration your advice .
7453120 yeah noticed that too but can't help but feel autocorrect was involved heavily lol
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Let's just say that typing at 2 am and not being a native english speaker don't really help my case .
What is this? a crossover that is not Displaced? are the ledgends true?
(not hating on those Displaced fics or those that like them. its just a joke.)
7455078 berserk
7462492 I know what beserk is. It was just a joke abaut the amaunt of displaced fics lately.
Give me this...give me this now
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Unfortunately, we will have to wait, I started to write a bit because I was bored and published the chapter while I was in the "zone". I soon realized I didn't think about the story in depth, only the major points .
Soooo to try to fix this mess, I'll need a bit of time. I also didn't realize how hard it would be to write a crossover, the characters already have their personalities and abilities so I can't really modify them as I want.
The biggest part I want to be careful of is I don't want to simply do some bad fanservice. It's my first story and I didn't really write before, especially in english so I have problems about how writing a good dialogue or a good action scene. I'm always afraid that the pace is too fast or the dialogue is flat, I hope I'll be able to do better for the next chapter, but I'm always happy when I get some feedback .
7514538 yeah it'll be an undertaking , maybe taking notes on characters will help.
Take notes on what they're like and what they can do then just try to implement it into the seen...idk but I like the story
WOW this actually looks good! We need more! No rush tho
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Done.
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Good job on the transfer of Guts to Eques!!
I love the way you portray Guts world.
Please continue