Excellent...

You did good kid...you did good ;-;

twilight is so gonna die because of this mode

It's good! Not to fast and not to slow. Keep this work up!

Maybe look at your grammar. Some words are misspelled and you should check your sentence flow.

good job, save for a few minor grammar mistakes, i recommend getting someone to edit it before posting, but sweet job after all, this will help sate my berserk cravings now that the anime ended....spring 2017 WHEEEEEEEEEE.
P.S. just had the most unholy of the craziest ideas... doom guy meets gatts.......

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Who's Doom Guy ? I don't watch the anime, I only read the manga so if it's a character maybe the name is different.

7579719 go play doom

a little visual aid here

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I see... I must say the idea is interesting but unfortunately, it will not happen in that story .

7579773 is ok it was just an interesting idea

I can't wait until Guts meets Fluttershy. That should be a very interesting conversation

7579883 I already have an idea on how it will happen .

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Thanks for your comment, feedback is always appreciated .

I'm sorry for taking so long at writing, I'm never happy with my work so it's difficult for me to decide if the new chapter is good enough to be published. But don't worry, I intend to continue the adventures of Gut in Equestria, I know the feel when you start to like a story and then realized the author will never work on itever again, I will try not to do that .

Please don't let this story die!

Keep going... At your own phase of course.

7580077 this is how i feel when i see this story m.memegen.com/87crpe.jpg ands2.quickmeme.com/img/fa/fae2e5b8606d8ee004e6e3883376de6ebb087e8104abcf21b964134f3b15e965.jpg icymisg.files.wordpress.com/2015/08/puss-in-boots.jpg?w=634