This story is a sequel to Amorous
Coppermane hasn't been himself lately. He's become distant. Quiet... somber... like when he first came to Canterlot High. As his girlfriend, it's Fluttershy's duty to talk to him and ask why he's been so silent. More importantly, it's her job to cheer him up.
But this task will soon prove to be no small feat. The secret to his sudden depression spell goes way back. Way before his time at CHS, when he used to attend Crystal Prep. And what happened to him might be one of the biggest reasons why he used to be so scared of everyone; of being betrayed by his friends in the beginning.
Coppermane & Fluttershy Series: 3.0
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So, wait, someone on this site actually writes Equestria Girls stuff that is NOT clop or crossover, and even has good grammar and high quality in general, A slight minus from using a (self-insert) OC in the fic, but at least you treated Fluttershy well. Just remember to bring her back by nine and we won't have any trouble...
Flare....
Flare if you hurt this kid....
7346151 i figured I'd get a demerit for a self-insert OC, but glad you liked everything else. Belive it or not, this OC actually launched my fanfiction career (""""""career"""""). I have written other stories without him though, so that's good, right?
Thank for the nice words!
Hmm, so this is like a sequel but like a prequel as well? Hmm, interesting... I'm keeping a eye on this, as I'm sure it'll be good like the rest of your stories!
And on a related note for your Sunset Shimmer focused story, I think this song will probably fit her during the story's events.
Holy SHIT! What a twist!
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Great story so far. I look forward to the next chapter!
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Why, thank you, it's nice of you to not... oh, you meant this guy.
When I started reading, I said "oh, this is sweet."
Then I got to the 'one week later' part and I said "woah, there's some mystery going on in here"
Then I got to the last line, and I said "WHAT?!"
Really great story, I can't wait to see some more. Tracking and Favorited!
7346257 You write about your self-insert OC romancing Equestria Girl Fluttershy too? What a small world.
Oh, this is going to be very sad. I already fell bad for Coppermane.
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I'm also on the same spot as you mentioned.
Very nice! I'm looking forward to this might go. I love how dedicated they are to one another, too. Very sweet!
ANOTHER SEQUAL!!!!
Wait a minute. . . That officially makes this a chronicle!!
The chronicles of fluttershy and Coppermane!
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I replied before you made the edit. I wrote an EqG fic that isn't crossover, clop or poorly-written.
Sunny Flare = lil bitch
It's been confirmed.
I'm sorry. Flare just hurt Coppermane and everyone's being mean to this kid. Please pardon me while I tell Farmer Bean about this.
Huh. Bean took that better than I thought.
Well, as sorry as I feel for Copper I can't say I'm not surprised on what Sunny did to him knowing his past history at Crystal Prep. Thank goodness Fluttershy's around to cheer him up, though. She's earned her element, that's for sure
Wow.. what an asshole
7350345 The lady
When it's the next chapter? I want more!
Steamy or not I enjoyed this chapter. I can wait for the next one.
I...sorry. It does feel a little forced. I mean, I think it would work better if Coppermane doesn't give them a chance and then the girls go to the Mane 6. It would feel more in character due to his bad memories with these girls.
7358265 No No No! I didn't mean it like that! I'm sorry! I didn't mean to make you depressed! I'm so so sorry!
7358260 yeah, I know.
You know what, I'm gonna unpublish and change some things. I can't upload something that bad
7358274 you didn't make me depressed. I'm gonna edit it and upload it again later
On one hand, it does seem Sunny and co and sorry for what they did, but on the other I can completely understand Coppermane (Again, pardon my language) not trusting them because of their shitty history together.
Dang...
I LOVE IT!
Finally, the Shadows pay!
So...there's only one chapter left?
Why do I feel this won't end well?
7358474 I'm a man, technically speaking. I can handle some cursing.
Damn. She's jealous, isn't she?
7359095 Ah, I understand but in my case there are certain words I like to refrain from using if I can when speaking to someone.
7359349 Wait. Nevermind. I just thought about it for a minute. She already knew.
When I saw that line I instantly thought of this-
That was awesome. Though I hoped Fluttershy could beat the crab out of Neon.
NEON!!!!!!!!
Question, how is he and his cult not expelled yet? Does Cinch just ignore bullying like she does with Twilight and blackmail?
This was a great ending and was really enjoyable. 100\10
Wraps everything up nicely. I cheered when Fluttershy used the Stare on Neon.
.......I believe this sums up my reaction rather nicely.
Now that is how you knock a bully down a peg! Awesome chapter man!
After reading this entire story....
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WHOOP WHOOP!
My reaction to Sunny and her friends breaking Copper's heart:
I loved it when Fluttershy got up, and starting staring down Neon and his evil crew. Justice has been served, I think?
Ah, who cares, it's epic to see Fluttershy's protective side for her prince.
YES!! Now that i am on my computer i can see everything more easily! THERE IS SEQUELS!!!! The love prolongs and the emotions outburst. Please dont ruin it for me at all. But i swear if i cry i gotta hand it to you. Legit top writer as of now. I am sure to read everything this long series has to offer. Though i havent read the first installment of it. I felt like doing so but when you said it was recommended it thought it wouldnt be so important. Might go back to read that one day
Also, I give my full apology of commenting on almost every chapter probably annoying you by filling up your notifications. But i simply must tell you how i felt on each of these chapters i read.
-Update- *Writing as i progress through*
A man never takes his time eating steak such like myself. hmmm... I wonder if he likes it the same way i do..
Oh come on!! Instantly my heart dropped at this like a massive magnet was just pulling my heart straight into the ground shattering it into a million pieces, I hope everythings okay.
We are going to have some serious problems if Flare gets in the way! If she in some way preforms another Trixie act on Coppermane I'm literally going to cry.
Other than that great chapter, Didn't see any errors that i could make out without paying the closest attention. God i hope they figure it all out in the next chapter. Still cant believe there's a sequel
Alright.. Heres what i have to say... I shed a tear when Copper was talking about how Flare had treated him back then. But god the end was so hot, No problems with that at all. after all. That is What "Romance" is all about right?
Cant wait to continue reading!
Seems just the tiniest bit rushed. But good on Copper for not giving in too easily. He should make them beg as much, if not more then how he pleaded for mercy when getting bullied. On to the next chapter! Great work