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I thought you said weast...



This story is a sequel to A Bunny a Day

The one and only Rainbow Dash. She's strong. She's funny. She's sassy. She's awesome. She's cute. So it's no wonder why you may have a bit of a crush on her... even though she'll never return your feelings.

One day, you spot the spitfire girl sitting alone in a tree mumbling to herself. And she doesn't sound happy. Maybe you can find out what's bothering her?

It probably won't work, but it's worth a try. Maybe it won't be such a bad idea after all?

5th installment of the The Cute, the Fluffy, and Romantic

WARNING: May contain lots of fluff

Idea and description by Harmony Pie

**Featured from August 20-21, 2016 :raritystarry:

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Comments ( 59 )

Bravo, my friend. This is an excellent story to add to your series. :twilightsmile:

Feel the Rainbow. Taste the Rainbow.

Awwwwwwww... this way really beautiful, especially the part where Rainbow Dash plays with her hair after telling her she's pretty, still really cute and adorable. :twilightsmile:

In your short description you forget the capital letter in Dash. I don't know why I bother pointing these things out, no one ever listens to me.

Aw man I've been waiting for this!

It seems the Feature Box has developed a fault...

The Feature Box seems to have developed a fault...

Why does this remind me of my first girlfriend weird except it was basketball still good story

You have no idea how helpful reading this was. I've spent three hours drinking Rockstars and trying to get rid of my writer's block, and I spent ten minutes reading this story. Great story. 11/10.

This is tooooooo cute for me to handle!
* dies of cuteness *

7496369 fixed. Thank you. No need to be like that :pinkiesad2:

Not bad, not bad at all. Your characterization of Rainbow was pretty well done, and the style felt looser, more comfortable than your last attempt. Beyond some typical romance cliches, I'd say you did quite well.

Take the like and be proud of it.

Congrats on the feature!

7496843 :raritystarry:

Thank you for the awesome idea!

This story was amazing. I loved every second of it. Each installment is better than the one before. It's definitely better than my version. I hope this gets featured this weekend. Also, my favorite part was the part where she was expecting him to ask her out right then or kiss her.

This is Awsome and I I enjoyed reading it bravo man:raritywink:

Nice and fluffy.

I'm not saying that I squealed like a little girl when I saw that you posted this story, but...I did.

That was a very great and romantic story, and next to "The Apple to my Eye", this might be my favourite. I like that it takes place over multiple days, and really loved how they were fighting over the kiss at the end. This is something Rainbow would probably do. Rainbow Dash and the protagonist play off one another greatly, and I simply loved the dialogues. You did an awesome job!

BUT! there is one single thing I want to point out: I do not like the makeout-scenes, because they are repetetive in every story. you did it very well in this story because it matched Rainbow's character, but it was still almost the exact same scene as from the other fluff-stories.

Asides from that, I have nothing to complain (and that's rare, believe me). Keep it up!

Okay, I freely admit I was waiting for this one. (What, don't give me that look!) I was not disappointed. This was definitely one of the better ones in this series.

To me, this was the best one so far. ADORABLE, AND I LOVED IT!!

I LOVED THIS ONE SO MUCH! You showed Rainbow's personality perfectly and everything fitted together. And so well written too! Have a favourite :rainbowkiss:

Not gonna lie. I was waiting for this one to come. That was awesome! :rainbowdetermined2:

If this was any sweeter, and/or if I were in the right mood, I would be in tears:twilightsmile:

Aww. Dashie likes affection too. Love it.

7498026 Rainbow's tough, but I like to think that she has a soft spot as well :rainbowkiss:

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7498053 sorry wrong story, deleted coment

Great story, have a favorite and a mustache.:moustache:

7498437 i don't play soccer. I did the best I could :rainbowlaugh:

Changing it would mean rewriting the story, so it'll remain as is. Sorry.

I just thought it'd be cute for them to play together.

I'm going to say it right now. You need to be a writer for MLP. I ain't joking. :twilightsmile:

I'd kill for a chapter with their date. This story was so fluffy and adorable it was amazing, better than your usual work. I salute you!

Every time you play soccer with yourself, you picture Rainbow Dash sitting in the bleachers cheering you on.

He pictures Rainbow Dash cheering him on when he plays with himself? :trixieshiftright:


Hope ya make a Sunset Shimmer one or maybe some of the girls from Crystal Prep

7502050 Sunset is next on the roster :sunsetemoticonthatdoesntexistcmonknighty:

Awesome work on this, quite entertaining! :rainbowdetermined2: hoho
Keep it up!

A great read. A minor note though for the next one: Twilight? Maybe have her be the one with the crush on you and the protagonist doesn't notice. Switch it up a bit?

Well, that is... Grass. Grass comes to mind when I think of the fluff bits.

Anyways. So! You climb a tree to comfort RD, you play a soccer game against RD (And Almost F*ckng Win), and the next day you're rolling in the grass with her as you two suckith thy faces... WAHOO!!

If that's not a good week, then you can die in a hole then I don't know what is!

arrrggghhh dammit!!!:facehoof:
why cant real girls be like this!? sassy but still caring not bitchy!:facehoof:
(dont judge me ive met horrible women in my life):raritydespair:

Maybe you can find out what's wrong? Maybe you can make her feel better?

No. I don't think I can. I'm late for class anyway so I have to move on and leave her to huff and puff. Gotta get that degree and graduation after all. Leave women until after school, that's the key to success.

finally, you made a RD fic, this one is real dank gud. it totally wash away all of my bad emotions. thanks for the story!

Welp, I'm hooked. Now I've got to read the whole series. :ajbemused:
Sweet Scottish Lord, I needed this after my countless attempts at confession. :heart::twilightsmile:

Beautiful work, Nordryd. I look forward to the rest of the series. :raritywink:

7618423 I look forward to hearing what you think. Thank you for your interest :pinkiehappy:

I love These stories a day I feel the exact same I feel know woman would want me eather but here somehow it works

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