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This story is a sequel to Sitting in a Tree

Sunset Shimmer. Smart, brave, talented, and beautiful. Is there a more perfect creature to ever walk this earth?

There's one problem, though. You can't seem to work up the nerve to talk to her. She's always with her friends, and you don't feel worthy to talk to a girl like her. What chance do you have?

But today is a new day. You've made up your mind. Today is the day. Today, you will talk to her. Charisma isn't your forte, but you'll have to find some within yourself if you ever want to ask Sunset out. Maybe just a simple compliment would get you on her radar? How hard can that be?

6th installment of the The Cute, the Fluffy, and Romantic

WARNING: May contain lots of fluff

**Featured from September 15-16, 2016 :raritystarry:

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Comments ( 88 )

YEAH! Go waifu material!

One thing.... Daaawwww!

Great job on another one buddy. Keep up the good work. :pinkiehappy:

That was amazing! And it's featured too! Good job my friend :pinkiehappy:

Great job as always bruh, you deserve it

The great Nordryd has struck the feature box once again with another AMAZING story!

It's so fluffy!!

This is great Sunset is best human.
You did a great jobb. Bravo Bravo:yay:

Comment posted by Nordryd deleted Sep 15th, 2016

Alright, I was hoping you'd do one for Sunset, and you did a grand job with this story!:yay:pinkiehappy::

Another amazingly sweet story, Nord! I loved it!

This was really good! Nice work, and have a thumbs up! :pinkiehappy:

~ Super-Brony12

I was hoping you do a Sunset story! :raritystarry:

It was very sweet and heartwarming. Excellent job! :twilightsmile:


This was very sweet. Sunny is my second best pony!

But I gotta say I was hoping she would ask him to go back with her to Equestria. I am dying for a fic about that!

Thumbs up. Either way!

This is such a beautiful story. I'm really glad to have read it. Keep it up, my friend. :twilightsmile:

It was pretty good, like you said its a bit cliche but that dosent make it bad.

Who wouldn't want to give Sunset a hug just to see her give that gorgeous smile:rainbowkiss:.

Amazing! I really hope I can get my own Shimmer-fic wiritng on par with something like this.

I gasped and squeal like a girl when I first saw this one-shot fic series uploaded.:raritystarry: :pinkiegasp:

Another wonderful story, it may be cliche but I don't care. It's Sunset!
I hope there will be a Sci-Twi later. :twilightsmile: :pinkiehappy:

7567465 You can bounce on it and not stop smiling.

Great job man I rated a 10 out of 10:pinkiehappy:

She's always with her friends, and you don't feel worthy to talk to a girl like her. What chance do you have?

I have no chance. So I wouldn't even bother wasting my time. If I'm not worthy to talk to her why would I even bother trying?

There. Your question is answered.

Do you think this series will go further then the humane 7 ?

I think you should clean up the tense inconsistencies, but it's not bad.

Sunset Shimmer. Smart, brave, talented, and beautiful. Is there a more perfect creature to ever walk this earth?

Lady Bacon Hair has nothing on Glim-Glam. You speak blasphemy.

so I just read through this whole series to date. and I learned somethings. apparently girl lips are sweet. and nobody compliments girls on their looks until a guy with a crush on them does. and girls sashay away from guys they just had a moment with.

I'm not saying anything's bad about this. but you could absolutely benefit from varying the wording up a little and such. some editing over time, and maybe work on synonyms too.

These are really cute! don't get me wrong, I like your work. but your work could really benefit from a bit of polish.

7569999 I know, I know :facehoof:

I always tell myself that I'm going to mix it up, but once I actually get there I don't know what else to do. And I know the formula is getting stale. I'm trying. My brain just is not creative when it comes to that kind of stuff.

Can't wait for the next one. These are short, sweet, romance fics and I shouldn't find myself squeeing over them, but I am. Congrats, you got a heavily armed drunk tough guy to squee over your fluff.

This is great. Just the right length and all kinds of cute. Well done. :twilightsmile:

Also calculus sucks.

7570068 something I find helps is letting it sit for a week, then coming back and editing. it can help you see things differently. and you spend that week working on other things.

but yeah. I still stick by suggestion of looking up synonyms. mostly cuz of the fluttershy one, where the bold guy boldly bolded her with his bold. varied wording helps things flow.

I liked it. I thought it was well written out and nicely told. Awesome writing.:pinkiehappy:

This was a great story!

7568824 Alright, asshole. Clearly, you've never fallen for someone you felt was out of your league, so allow me to illuminate you.

When something like this happens, you don't really hold the emotional reins. You feel unworthy, you feel sad because you think you can't be with her, you feel happy when you see her, you feel angry at yourself for not daring, you feel confused because of the impossible mess in your hormonal head, and that's fine.

Eventually, either you take the not-worthy-route and give up, keepimg everything to yourself, or you take the fuck-it-route and throw causion to the air and confess your feelings, hoping for the best and fearing the worst. You can reason it any way you want, but that's what it boils down to.

Honestly, to choose the fuck-it-route? It takes brass balls, and it's admirable from anyone that tries, even of the protagonist fucked it up a bit.

So, unless you've experienced this confusing experience, kindly shut the fuck up and let otjers enjoy it, you cynical dickweed.

7570700 Um... no no no. Please don't hate on him. It's sarcasm. We cleared it up.

7570700 Every girl has been out of my league. Your advice might work for you but it doesn't mean it works for others so easily.

Now calm down, drink some milk, and have another go at Dark Souls; I know it's put you in a bad mood, but I'm sure you'll get pass Sen's Fortress this time, junior.

7570702 Oh no, it's fine dude. He lost a lot of souls in Dark Souls, that's why he's angry.

7570714 First off, what advice? Secondly, call me junior again and I'm feeding your organs to your next of kin. Thirdly, I'm sorry that every girl you fall for is out of your league, but this is an internet story, there's really no reason to get so uppity about it.

7571723 Did you not read the last comment I sent you? We're fine. It was sarcasm, and I misinterpreted it. Please don't make me report you

7571725 It's my fault. I provoked him. Report me if anyone has to be reported.

7571723 Don't be sorry. I stopped caring long ago. I'm happier being an idiot for the amusement of other people now. Knowing I can make somebody laugh makes me feel good.

Besides, at least around my area anyway, there's not a lot of pretty British women if I can be honest. Saggy faces, chain smokers and depressing boring personalities? Bleugh! No thanks.

I already have the face of a troll. i don't need the ugliness being multiplied. XD

Guess that means Human Twilight is the last one you're going to do. Btw love this romance story along with the others.

That was so adorable! How can this be weak?

7571725 great story. at least u made a fic about my waifu XD

She really does she's my most favorite in Equestria Girls other than Fluttershy and Rarity sorry Spike lol but you really need some one your own age and another dragon/dog

I do love me some violent stories, but I've got a soft spot for romance and the adorable things.

In terms of adorable levels, I rank it this:

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