• Published 7th May 2016
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Blinded Faults - flaminkomage



After Rainbow Dash was teased, mocked, and bullied by the Wonderbolts, she was soon accepted with open hooves once again. Even though all seems well, Soarin is still unsure about how to approach the situation.

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Blinded Faults

Blinded Faults

Ink Mage


"Rainbow Dash!" Spitfire called out across the runway. Her new teammate perked up excitedly.

"Yes Ma'am!" Rainbow Dash said, saluting and looking both ways before crossing. She didn't want another disaster like before to happen again.

"At ease," Spitfire said, before continuing. "The Bolts' always head out after a performance, you wanna come?" she asked. Dash grinned, before striking a pose.

"Oh yes," she said in a deep voice. Spitfire held in a chuckle, before shaking her head and flying away.

"Meet us at the front of the compound in a half hour, 'kay?" she asked, her figure getting smaller each passing second.

"Copy that!" Dash yelled as loud as she could so the firey captain could hear her. She looked around at the empty field, before doing a little double-take once she knew the coast was clear.

She was so thankful that the Wonderbolts had accepted her back, even if it did mean having to get a horrible nickname. Rainbow Crash, she shuddered every time she thought about it.

But hey, it wasn't as bad as Spitfire's name...

Dash grinned heavily, before fluttering inside the locker room to get changed into more comfortable attire.

Not saying that the Wonderbolt suit didn't look totally awesome.

She entered the room, which seemed empty to her, and slauntered over to her locker. She pulled off her uniform, and stretched out.

"Lookin' good, Dash." She continued to strike ridiculous poses in front of the mirror. "Lookin' real good."

Rainbow Dash suddenly heard quiet snickers coming from the entrance to the room. She quickly zipped around to lay her eyes on the last pony she expected to see; Soarin.

The baby-blue stallion noticed she was staring at him, and burst into a fit of laughter.

"Oh... oh Rainbow Dash," he said in-between his giggles. "P-P-P-Priceless! HA!"

Rainbow Dash's eyes widened as she surveyed the scene.

"S-Soarin!" she stammered out. "Oh dear... You weren't supposed to see that..." she said as quietly as possible. Soarin snorted.

"I got that," he said, trying hard to contain his laughter. Dash rolled her eyes.

"Don't tell me you've never done anything like that before," she said with a devilish smirk. Soarin suddenly stopped his act and straightened up like a stick.

"Uh..." he said, averting his eyes away from her. Dash furrowed her eyebrows and smiled with a demon-like spur.

"Gotcha," she said in a soft, cunning voice, bending down slowly. Soarin's eyes widened as he realized what she was about to do.

"Wait, Dash, n-" he started, before being interrupted by her body pouncing on his.

The two looked at each other, before smiling wide and beginning to laugh. Dash got up, and helped the blue Wonderbolt up. They grinned, before Dash turned away to look back at her locker.

"So, why are you here anyway? Aren't you supposed to be getting ready to leave or something?" she asked. Soarin shrugged, before walking up beside her.

"Actually, I was looking for you," he said. Dash turned to face him, and raised her eyebrows.

"Why?" she asked.

"I've been wanting to talk to you for a while, but you never seem to be alone around here, always around the other's or something." he said. Dash nodded.

"Yeah, I guess you're right," she said with a smile. "But why do you wanna talk to me in the first place?" she asked. Soarin sighed softly.

"Well... uh... you see..." he stumbled out. Dash coughed impatiently.

"Yes?" she asked. Soarin gave her a weird look.

"Uh... the thing is..." he said, trying again. Dash rolled her eyes.

"Oh spit it out," she said with a smile. Soarin shook his head rapidly.

"I... came to say I'm sorry," he said quietly. Dash's ears perked up, as she looked over to the stallion with wide eyes.

"What? For what?" she asked. Soarin slumped his head down.

"For treating you like I did..." he said. Dash took a step back.

"What do you mean?" she asked him.

"I don't know... what I did to you was wrong," Soarin said. Dash bit her lip and looked away. "I can't believe I said those things to you..." he continued.

"Nah, it's fine Soarin, real-"

"No, Dashie. It was wrong," Soarin cut in. Dash looked up to him.

Did he just call me 'Dashie'? "Uh..."

"I... I don't even know what to say anymore. Rainbow Crash? What was I thinking?" Soarin went on. Dash scrunched her eyebrows at him, and shook her head.

"Soarin, seriously. It's okay. I got over it, really," she said. Soarin took a step up to her.

"Are... are you sure?" he asked. Dash nodded.

"Don't worry about it. Besides, with me on your team, it's me who should be apologizing," she said glumly.

"What?"

"I was such a fool all those times. I can't believe I actually thought I could pull off a stunt like that in the show," Dash said. Soarin gave her a small smile, and draped a hoof over her.

"Hey, it's better than what I did in my first performance," he said. Dash tilted her head.

"What did you do?" she asked. Soarin chuckled with an embarrassing blush.

"Oh... well... I might have tried grabbing my teammates, throwing them in the air, and catching them," he said shyly. Dash widened her eyes in shock.

"You did WHAT?!" she yelled. "I can't even begin to imagine what Spitfire did to you after that," she said with a grin. Soarin shuddered and shook his head.

"Oh you don't even want to know," he said. "Let's just say... she isn't the biggest fan of ponies flinging her into the air."

Dash snorted.

"Ha..." she let out a suppressed giggle. Soarin smiled.

"Anyway, enough about me. How are you feeling?" he asked her. Dash shrugged.

"Gotta say, that massive blow to the head was no laughing matter, but I feel a lot better now, thanks," she said, before kicking up into the air. "Now if we don't hurry up, we're gonna be late for the celebratory party."

Soarin flew up after her.

"Heh... you got that right! And knowing Spitfire, she'll be quite... upset if we don't show up on time," he said, laughing silently to himself. Dash giggled.

"Well, let's not learn how that's like, and go for it," she exclaimed, before flying out of the compound.

Soarin stared after her figure, and shook his head, chuckling.

"Oh Rainbow Dash... you'll be a great addition to this team," he said, before flying after her.

Author's Note:

I gotta say, I completely freaked over the new episode. God, I loved it so much.
I legit cried when Spitfire told Dash, "What she said." OH MY GOD.

I was SQUEALING when Dash did her Rarity impression and flirted with Soarin. EEEEEE!

Ah well, just had to write this little thing before continuing with my other projects. XD Ahh SoarinDash is just too cute man! ^.^

Anyway, thanks for reading! Hope you enjoyed! ;3

Comments ( 52 )

Your opinion on the episode is exactly mine XDD

I love the fanfic btw X33

wow you are fast :rainbowlaugh: amazing story :raritywink:

7195746
Oh yes. XD Thanks! ^^

BEST DUCKING THINK EVER I NEEDED THAT FLIFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF FFLUUUUUUUUUUUUFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF! <3 I LOVE YOU MAN! ^^ XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD *Dies~*

7195749
I was actually planning on uploading this a few hours ago, but got a little distracted.
Thanks!

7195756 EEE THANKS TEA! XDD

7195758

( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

With the call....

7195763 You got it. XDD Tho that call was amazing.

7195779
Oh hehe... XD Thanks! ^^

7195808
7195779
Well, I mean, that's your opinion. I for one really enjoyed the episode. X3

7195815
The whole concept of Rainbow Dash becoming a Wonderbolt, her amazing impressions, the SoarinDash, basically the whole shindig. I thought it was very entertaining, and is probably my favorite episode of them all. X3
But meh, opinions.

Pause #14 · May 7th, 2016 · · 2 ·

7195836 Do you know the difference between hazing and bullying because it appears you don't.

Pause #15 · May 7th, 2016 · · 2 ·

7195851 Then you'd recognized they weren't bullying her. They were giving her a hazing. A pretty tame one too.

Fantastica i wanted to say that

I was excited as seeing so many comments to read... :pinkiehappy:
...Only to discover they were pretty much all from the same few people. :pinkiesad2:
Still, good story. Something tells me this episode is going to inspire a lot of fiction in it's wake... :twilightsheepish:
I look forward to reading them all... :twilightsmile:

7196069
And I'm glad you did. X3 Thanks.

7196184
Mhm. :pinkiecrazy: Well, I'm glad you enjoyed nevertheless, thanks. I can't wait to read all the fics based off this episode too. :scootangel:

Cute story! I for one didn't really like the episode that much, but it's good that you do:raritywink:

There was no romance in this story.
Why have a romance tag?

7196327
I'm not the biggest fan of AppleDash. Glad you enjoyed nevertheless! Thanks. ^.^

7196406
No romance? It was pure fluff. (At least, that's what I hoped to portray.)

7196491
Oh thank you. ^.^ I'm glad to hear that!

7196495
The story was cute, very cute!
I just didn't get a romance vibe, more of a friend one.

Dammit! You beat me to it! *cri*
Great Story though!

Gosh you work fast.

I'll get to reading it soon, but I'm sure it will be excellent and worth the wait.

7197538
Oh haha sorry 'bout that. XD
Thanks though!

7197911
Oh haha. XD Honestly, it doesn't take me very much time to write SoarinDash. (Except for the parts when I'm squeeing so hard in my seat as I type and fumble at my words. XD)
Thanks! I hope you'll enjoy it when you get to reading it! ^.^

7198489 Is that...a picture of Rainbow Dash in Soarin's locker!?:pinkiegasp:

7198589
I actually believe it was Rainbow Blaze, since the coat was more periwinkle than cyan. XP

7198657 Well, it might just be the shading, and it looks more like a mare than a stallion. :rainbowhuh:

7198781
I honestly highly doubt it. I've roamed dA for theories, and all proof is somehow inclining towards Blaze. :trixieshiftright:

Awh, such a cute little story :pinkiehappy: I loved this episode so much I watched it like a million times already and I still get over excited at the beginning when Spitfire tells Rainbow Dash that she's now an official Wonderbolt :yay::yay::yay:

7199911
I know right?! I loved it so much!

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed.

This is a cute little fluffy story.:pinkiehappy: And I for one enjoyed the episode (Especially the SoarinDash moments:raritystarry: )
~Twilight the unicorn

7200505
Same here! Thank you!

The second I saw Rainbow pulling a rarity to SOARIN, I was like:
"ARE THEY STALKING THE SHIPPERS?!"
then that turned into my head exploding with ideas.. Then me hopping onto the home page of fimFiction hoping there was a fic when I realized...
YOU PROBABLY MADE ONE! And here I am.. Reading this
Amazing btw

7202898
Oh. My. Gosh. yES.
I sure hope there'll be a lot more SoarinDash fics based on the episode... I'd love to read them. XD
And yeah, whenever I see a canon scene interaction between Dash and Soarin, I usually try and expand on it with a fic. Sometimes, it turns out okay, others, not so much. :twilightsheepish:
Anyway, I'm super glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reading, and for the interest. ^.^

I SQUEALED AT THE SAME PART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I was on the same boat with during this episode, too (lol, look how late I am to the party). I've always shipped SoarinDash, but it kinda went to the backburner until this episode came on. And this fic! It's so cute! A very nice continuation to the episode with your own personal flair to it, ahh! I love it! :heart:

7279145
Eee I'm glad you did!
Thank you!

7203855 Maybe Not Just Them, You Know it would probably Be the entire squad,
Spitfire, Fleetfoot, Soarin And Rainbow dash. And It Ends Up Being About Soarin In some way...
Just What I Think!:twilightsmile:
You Can Imagine Whatever you want, After All
Soarindash Is Best Ship\Sailboat! :pinkiehappy::twistnerd::heart::pinkiehappy:

I freaked out on that episode as well!:pinkiehappy: *Brohoof:coolphoto:

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