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themouthofmush


life is a pile of good and bad. the good doesn’t always soften the bad, but vice versa the bad doen’t always spoil the good or make them unimportant.

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This story is a sequel to Series of Firsts


It's that time of year again. The leaves were a multitude of colors and the wind started to turn to a crisp. With the Running of the Leaves coming up, the guys decide to do their usual "competition," but with a slight twist.


Story takes place during the events of the episode "Fall Weather Friends."
Characters will be added to the tags when they are introduced, as well as the OCs and their respective owners.
Greyscale is owned by myself, while Icy Mist is owned by FlashKenshi77 and Pop Tart is owned by FamousLastWords.
Edited by FlashKenshi77 and PonyJosiah13.

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Comments ( 7 )

A few minor grammatical errors (you'll probably catch them if you take a closer look), but this seems good. I look forward to the ongoing adventures of Grey.

7181208 in all fairness, if the errors are said in dialogue, they will be staying since that's how i see those characters actually talking. other than that, i'll reread the chapter after i'm done with the story.

7181325 It's just little things like using "one" instead of "on." No worries.

Squee hee hee, this one was so adorable and funny!

I don't even have anything else to say because I'm giggling too much!

“Thank you.” We went to go upstairs, but I turned to face her just before the first step. “Oh, I nearly forgot. Would you and Mr. Cakes still want me to help you out? Kind of forgot if it would be this weekend or the next one.”

I'm glad I decided to reread this; I know what was happening here now...

At least I think I do. Was he referring to his talent, or is this another odd job of his?

Anything that involves poptart stepping in front of a friend train would be awesome.

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