*<>* mmhm cloppy goodness finally ... Never thought Twilights mom was such a lightweight or was she planning on doing this since he accidentially spied her naked in the shower ... ~ he wakes up in the morning alone in his bed ..."Was it really just a dream? " he thinks as he trots into kitchen for breakfast and Immediatly notices certain leftovers still coating her face ... " ah guess not "
Pl-lease let what happened not just be a cherry limeade induced wet dream.
I'm not at all ashamed to admit that I'm looking forward to the aftermath of Velvet and her little boytoy's tryst more than the actual coming clop itself. Dis' gonna be good y'all.
P.S. Last chapter felt like a japanese anime romcom episode for me.
I'm kind of hoping this IS a dream and Velvet will just be like "Don't worry dear, I had to clean Shining Armor's bedsheets nearly every day before he met Cadance... and even after that, until he moved out."
If I have one bit of criticism, it's that there's little (in the story itself) that indicates that this is a MILF-colt relation. Velvet may as well be any random (young) mare, as it's only because I already know her from the show that I'm aware she's older. So it feels like a bit of a wasted opportunity to not describe her (elderly) features, the awkwardness/embarrassment of being aroused by an older mare, explain what makes her so attractive to him (especially compared to, you know, filly's his age), and with Velvet perhaps teasing him about it, feeling flattered, Velvet being incredibly experienced while he's clueless, etc.
It's still nice, mind you. But I feel you're not making the most out of this unusual relationship - what makes it so unusual.
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As for "MILF things" i meant :
The words are simple enough to understand, but you feel like there is a hidden weight behind them. They feel important. It feels almost like she is asking permission to continue.
Well, I can't say I approve of how it started, but damn if I can't stop reading. Keep up the good work. I'm curious how Velvet will feel about this come morning. I predict a lot of needless apologizing on both ends.
What's wrong? I think a better question would be... is there still something good inside us? .
THAT WAS AMAZING!!!
...Also, I find myself looking forward to the inevitable moment where she wakes up and goes:
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Im like 600 this made it in my favorites
*<>* mmhm cloppy goodness finally ... Never thought Twilights mom was such a lightweight or was she planning on doing this since he accidentially spied her naked in the shower ...
~ he wakes up in the morning alone in his bed ..."Was it really just a dream? " he thinks as he trots into kitchen for breakfast and Immediatly notices certain leftovers still coating her face ... " ah guess not "
Hey, this is pretty good...
Ask me that question again when you're not writing about best MILF.
7193452 i do believe we are at odds my good sir.
7194100 *Raises glass in toast*
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
0:58_5/7/2016
7194100 If you don't want people to like it, don't write it so well.
Hoo boy Velvet is going to panic in the morning, assuming that wasn't a dream a course.
That's either a changeling or this went from 0 to 100 real quick! XD
Pl-lease let what happened not just be a cherry limeade induced wet dream.
I'm not at all ashamed to admit that I'm looking forward to the aftermath of Velvet and her little boytoy's tryst more than the actual coming clop itself. Dis' gonna be good y'all.
P.S. Last chapter felt like a japanese anime romcom episode for me.
Grate story! Hope to see more very soon.
7194100 I know right? Velvet is top MILF.
Plus you are a pretty good writer for someone cranking these out almost every other day.
Velvet be like, "Who's your Mommy~?"
Who's gonna bet Velvet goes crazy with guilt the next morning?
7194371 I'll say 'aye' to that. Alcohol tends to have that sort of effect on people (or ponies).
Remember Colts "Mistakes into Miricles"
I'm kind of hoping this IS a dream and Velvet will just be like "Don't worry dear, I had to clean Shining Armor's bedsheets nearly every day before he met Cadance... and even after that, until he moved out."
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Either that, or she's gonna wake up first and be like "So, I f*cked him last night... I needed to do that badly."
Nothings wrong with us we just love what you are creating here :)
I was hoping she had found the panties from before and decided to mention it. Oh well, more time for that later.
What can I say, MILFs are my kryptonite
So, I wanked a cougar that I will never regret wanking? Hold on, I need to check my Xbox...
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Pretty enjoyable read.
If I have one bit of criticism, it's that there's little (in the story itself) that indicates that this is a MILF-colt relation. Velvet may as well be any random (young) mare, as it's only because I already know her from the show that I'm aware she's older. So it feels like a bit of a wasted opportunity to not describe her (elderly) features, the awkwardness/embarrassment of being aroused by an older mare, explain what makes her so attractive to him (especially compared to, you know, filly's his age), and with Velvet perhaps teasing him about it, feeling flattered, Velvet being incredibly experienced while he's clueless, etc.
It's still nice, mind you. But I feel you're not making the most out of this unusual relationship - what makes it so unusual.
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Agreed, we're all saw that coming but still...
Let's just hope that was a lucid dream. Maybe it's just me but knowing this Velvet so far, I can say drunk or not, she shouldn't be that desperate, it's just 3 or 4 days he arrived yet she goes strange for the kill. I image her to do more subtle teasing, adult humors, being mysterious , you know, MILF things... or at least keep up what she has been doing so far, not this highschool girl things.
As for "MILF things" i meant :
^ This is nice, I love this
Plus, the update speed is insane
YES!!! FINALLY!!!
HOUSTON, WE HAVE LIFTOFF!!!
TOUCHDOWN!!!
A MASSIVE RKO!!!
YAHTZEE!!!
... thanks for not toying with my emotions this time, Max! Have a cookie!
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...my apologies...
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IS THERE THOUGH?!
I mean, we followed a man who called himself MadMaxtheBlack.... Though I'm not one to talk
>Sees chapter name
Ooh is this the one where they finally fuck?
>begins reading
Rip Velvet.
When she wakes up she is going to freak out.
Well, you see...
We are all weird pieces of crap. Ignore us and continue writing.
Clop+written by Blackie = success. Cuz dayum dude! You write that sheit well!
Lovin this so far. Keep up the good job
7194675 I bring: Alcohol to the stand!
Alcohol speeds everything up!
7194717 ...AND BOOM GOES THE DYNAMITE...
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600+ likes on week 1? That has to be a record.
7194675 Nah, man. Velvet's only got a few weeks with you. Got to get while the gettings good!
Well that was hot.
7193984 well depends, good as in helpful good or insanity good?
It took (you) 3 or 4 days just to get to velvet , unless it's a very noice wet dream?wow
Well, I can't say I approve of how it started, but damn if I can't stop reading. Keep up the good work. I'm curious how Velvet will feel about this come morning. I predict a lot of needless apologizing on both ends.
Commence read.
Velvet. Not sure what else to add there.
How the morning goes, shall tell whether good or bad.
What's wrong with us... hmm... ask us all that again, when you're not writing delicious MILF, KK?
Awesome chapter dude, awesome chapter! Hahaha, this went from awesome to... messy real quick oh yesh
damn danel
I second that.
Or even better: join her!!
Says the one who wrote it.
Nice chapter.
I'm waiting for the (probably very awkward) breakfast.
7194479 Got anymore to share? Please? Just pm me some links if you want.
7201328 fancy seeing you here
7194047 Wow, you are really old!
Gotta say, Velvet was really sexy here.
Indeed