...... i suddenly wish i could have this colts lifestyle. Being able to pass classes with C's or B's, and banging my moms hot friend. then again, the repercussions of that would be felt by both me and my GF if i were caught with her.... Still do it regardless. :3
Wow, I just discovered this story today and have just finished reading every last chapter. I've got to say, i love this story. The progression isn't to rushed, the narrator isn't in the way of character interaction, and you've allowed for the characters develop very well. It feels like I'm actually there, also I like it how you give subtle references to the four princess, (Foreshadowing possibly?) Very cute story, I can't wait to read more.
She won't tell him where they're going? What, are they having dinner with the princesses or something?
...And suddenly, the term 'royal treatment' comes to mind for a chapter title.
Edit: If I'm right pleeeease let Cadence find them out, yet not snitch on them, do to her secretly being into coltcon. That would not only be hilarious, but also strangely fitting/disturbing considering she was a foalsitter.
I may not be the sharpest beak in the aviary, but I get the feeling that you're trying to tell us something with the way Velvet talks about her latest novel.
I also get the feeling that your fans probably won't let that happen.
The minutes pass by as both of you remain as you are, enjoying the warmth of the shower as well as each other's presence. Velvet slowly rocks you back and forth, humming a quiet tune into your mane.
7211515 It's the base of the tail. When people refer to it in pony stuff they generally mean the underside where there's an inch or two before the tail hair starts. Kind of an intimate spot but not overtly sexual.
This chapter was also a very nice change of pace from just another sex scene. Makes me wonder if nothing more is going to grow between them than only friends with temporary benefits. Those two seem to bond on more than one level.
On the other side, Velvet has shown to have a sense of realism as well, so she could hold on to the "we cannot have a relationship" stance, since she is right about that, for many reasons.
AAAAHH cannot read the author's mind!! Can only wait :) Which is good, cause I don't like spoilers. Loving the story!
Thanks for the answers Spazz6768 & The almighty bread god. I don't really know much about equine anatomy (much less pegesi), so the quick info on it was much appreciated.
I had thought that MadMaxtheBlack might have misspelled dick until I realized that the laws of Rule 34 would've led to them having shower sex if that were actually the case.
Also, thanks for the GIF offer The almighty bread god, but I'm afraid that I'll have to pass. I fear that if I accept it it might reignite my obssession with GIFS again, and I'm already having trouble trying, and spectacularly failing, at curbing my tvtropes addiction as it is.
You get a strange feeling as she holds you in her legs, almost as if the world did matter at the moment. Tirek could come raging through again, and you wouldn’t even care as long as you could stay like this.
I believe you meant "didn't" That's the only thing I noticed. Absolutely LOVING this story!
This chapter makes me want to go take a dip in a nice, warm bath. I can imagine it now: slowly stepping into the warm water, letting my aches and pains evaporate as the steamy vapor fills my sinuses, making me forget the labors of the day. Then I'd just lay my head back, way back so my chin touches the water, and just close my eyes shut slowly, slowly, until...
7214612 One of the best parts of childhood was taking a warm bath before bed
Sadly, most adults don't have that luxury Not to mention they're rarely deep or long enough to relax in and you wind up in an extremely cramped position
I remember one of my many homes that had what was basically a jacuzzi in the master bathroom that was deep enough for a bath
I must say all clop aside this is a vary good story. I am hoping for too things as it looks like this story will be coming to a end in the next week or about. a sequel would be nice but for that to happen this needs to work out between the two lovers and be a permanent thing some how.
What has happened to us bronys? Why have we created erotic fantasy in stories, art, and music, why have we done it. I know why, it's because we are all horny teenagers who like clop. What has humanity become? but still, great story! <3
You want to really blow your readers' minds? Then how about this for a twist. They actually stop the sex at the end of the two weeks, end as just friends, and the colt meets a filly his own age and falls in love, looking back on the events of this story as a fond memory. I don't think anyone would see that coming and it would be an equally good ending as them hooking up romantically.
Nooo! Not on a Friday!
7211280 This is Friday's chapter... at least, it is for me.
Happy Friday the 13th...
This has, surprisingly enough, been a very nice story to read during my stressful finals week. Thank you very much, my good man!
7211285 Here at MadMax Industries, we aim to please!
This is back in the feature box... Again...
What is this?
The fourth time now?
Damn son, this was a nice chapter.
...... i suddenly wish i could have this colts lifestyle. Being able to pass classes with C's or B's, and banging my moms hot friend.
then again, the repercussions of that would be felt by both me and my GF if i were caught with her.... Still do it regardless. :3
Commence read.
A nice relaxed chapter.
Wow, I just discovered this story today and have just finished reading every last chapter. I've got to say, i love this story. The progression isn't to rushed, the narrator isn't in the way of character interaction, and you've allowed for the characters develop very well. It feels like I'm actually there, also I like it how you give subtle references to the four princess, (Foreshadowing possibly?) Very cute story, I can't wait to read more.
Yes, and now it's 1200 in twelve days.
Damn!! Nice work again! :)
And yeah happy Friday the 13th. :D Good Luck to all of those who has to face Jason. xD
Can't wait for the Ponyville MILF story to be honest. :) I hope the main charakter is gonna be the mare I have in mind.
Cheers and have a nice day!
\m/
She won't tell him where they're going? What, are they having dinner with the princesses or something?
...And suddenly, the term 'royal treatment' comes to mind for a chapter title.
Edit: If I'm right pleeeease let Cadence find them out, yet not snitch on them, do to her secretly being into coltcon. That would not only be hilarious, but also strangely fitting/disturbing considering she was a foalsitter.
I may not be the sharpest beak in the aviary, but I get the feeling that you're trying to tell us something with the way Velvet talks about her latest novel.
I also get the feeling that your fans probably won't let that happen.
Also, what's a dock?
I want wings so I can go to princess unicorn land and get them massaged.
7211282 dammit you just had to point that out. I was already paranoid enough before bed.
Dude i loved this chapter
What? No porn in this chapter?... I'd complain, but...
m.quickmeme.com/img/bf/bfd88dcf35261034f6d9f8b57171fa98ecda9d1c17e6ea3007eca2563e2e58d3.jpg
^ THIS SCENE !! THIS VERY SCENE
25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lythdaJeZg1rnpo0wo1_250.gif
Velvet why must you keep reminding us that the month is going to be over
7211616 and best of all... its a milf!
7211515
It's the base of the tail. When people refer to it in pony stuff they generally mean the underside where there's an inch or two before the tail hair starts. Kind of an intimate spot but not overtly sexual.
Ledger...
Hmm.
Ledger!
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/258497/shifting-melodies
Level Ledger?
7211515 the dock is a bit of muscle just a bit above a horse's anus.
if you'd like I could PM you a gif I've got that shows it off pretty well.
This chapter was also a very nice change of pace from just another sex scene. Makes me wonder if nothing more is going to grow between them than only friends with temporary benefits. Those two seem to bond on more than one level.
On the other side, Velvet has shown to have a sense of realism as well, so she could hold on to the "we cannot have a relationship" stance, since she is right about that, for many reasons.
AAAAHH cannot read the author's mind!! Can only wait :) Which is good, cause I don't like spoilers. Loving the story!
Thanks for the answers Spazz6768 & The almighty bread god. I don't really know much about equine anatomy (much less pegesi), so the quick info on it was much appreciated.
I had thought that MadMaxtheBlack might have misspelled dick until I realized that the laws of Rule 34 would've led to them having shower sex if that were actually the case.
Also, thanks for the GIF offer The almighty bread god, but I'm afraid that I'll have to pass. I fear that if I accept it it might reignite my obssession with GIFS again, and I'm already having trouble trying, and spectacularly failing, at curbing my tvtropes addiction as it is.
Awwwww, this was a kinda sweet chapter,. good showing! hehehe
7211515 it's the base of a horse's tail.
Hey, Max... how is it Shining had clothes tailored for a pegasus?
Cute chapter. Velvet is such a badass about everything.
7211983 He doesn't, but Velvet is creative.
i.imgur.com/lbb3D7G.gif
7212805 Same haha
FNaF World came out with Update 2, TJOC: R came out with Foxy, and now this. I am having the best Friday I ever had.
7211282
GAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!! DAMMIT MAX, YOU TEASED ME YET AGAIN!!!!
... this is the third time...
I believe you meant "didn't"
That's the only thing I noticed. Absolutely LOVING this story!
Vert nicely done.
Nice interlude chapter with Violet showing her motherly side. Congrats again sir.
What? No chapter today?
[youtube=https://youtube.com/watch?t=5m9s&v=ESDAXKC2418]
This chapter makes me want to go take a dip in a nice, warm bath. I can imagine it now: slowly stepping into the warm water, letting my aches and pains evaporate as the steamy vapor fills my sinuses, making me forget the labors of the day. Then I'd just lay my head back, way back so my chin touches the water, and just close my eyes shut slowly, slowly, until...
Screw this, I'm going to sleep.
So I'm finally caught up. Now the wait for the next entry.
LIES AND SLANDER!
7214612 One of the best parts of childhood was taking a warm bath before bed
Sadly, most adults don't have that luxury
Not to mention they're rarely deep or long enough to relax in and you wind up in an extremely cramped position
I remember one of my many homes that had what was basically a jacuzzi in the master bathroom that was deep enough for a bath
Ahhh, to be young again...
I must say all clop aside this is a vary good story.
I am hoping for too things as it looks like this story will be coming to a end in the next week or about.
a sequel would be nice but for that to happen this needs to work out between the two lovers and be a permanent thing some how.
Well these two chapters were amazing. <3
Magic in the shower. I like it.
7221804 You people, Well MadMax? I'm waiting for our..... Reward......
7222006 Still working on it. I had to help a family member move this weekend without warning, so I had no time to write.
7222046 Oh I didn't mean any disrespect. I was just referencing this...
Anyway have fun!
What has happened to us bronys? Why have we created erotic fantasy in stories, art, and music, why have we done it. I know why, it's because we are all horny teenagers who like clop. What has humanity become? but still, great story! <3
Three days until the next chapter? Must be a good one!
You want to really blow your readers' minds? Then how about this for a twist. They actually stop the sex at the end of the two weeks, end as just friends, and the colt meets a filly his own age and falls in love, looking back on the events of this story as a fond memory.
I don't think anyone would see that coming and it would be an equally good ending as them hooking up romantically.