Max, you just can't do this to me! I had finally gotten off of my addiction to pony porn only thanks to cutting edge virtual reality porn, and now I'm being sucked back In. I thought I could escape, but there is no way out. Only deeper into the abyss. On a side note, for something I went into thinking it would be total smut, you are doing a surprising amount of charchter and world building. Remember kids, don't judge a fic by its tags!
~ Oh no ... Not Velvet Sparkles three bean chili ! That stuff is guaranteed to give you fire hole from Tartarus ! Beware da Chili ! why must you abuse my bum ..you sexy mum ... -Atlas
7185543 Yeah... I'm kind of in the same boat, lol. My thought process was along the lines of, "Oh, clop in the feature box. Surprise. Oh wait, hey... Madmaxtheblack... Well I should check it out." I'd say you are to this site what cake is to Jim Gaffigan.
Cake can bring people together. "Hey, it's Jim's birthday." "Oh, I hate that guy." "There's cake in the conference room." "Well I should say hello..."
7185543 7185623 To be fair though, at first glance of the description I thought the main character was Shining Armor. I'm not super into that. The Twilight Velvet part. There's nothing wrong with the character in general.
7185543 When you make a couple of my favourite stories, I tend to be a bit more trusting of what stories you produce.
7185623 MadMaxtheBlack seems to be simultaneously shameless with the stories he writes and somehow thoughtful enough to make them really good. He writes smut that develops the relationship of the characters before the clop, making the story fun to read even if you skipped what would otherwise be the main attraction.
7184976 I used to do a trick with the kids with glasses, if the looked at the board to close I could see where all of their ships were, after that no one played with me
It must be a pain in the butt to have your ears constantly move and fold with your emotion. It always tells everypony else if you're mad, sad, or whatever. You'd never be able to keep it to yourself.
... and suddenly, I'm reminded why I don't play checkers with my mother anymore.
Commence read.
That look, it's a powerful, knowing one.
That chili does sound good though.
Max, you just can't do this to me! I had finally gotten off of my addiction to pony porn only thanks to cutting edge virtual reality porn, and now I'm being sucked back In. I thought I could escape, but there is no way out. Only deeper into the abyss. On a side note, for something I went into thinking it would be total smut, you are doing a surprising amount of charchter and world building. Remember kids, don't judge a fic by its tags!
7182131 Here at MadMax Industries, we aim to please.
~ Oh no ... Not Velvet Sparkles three bean chili !
That stuff is guaranteed to give you fire hole from Tartarus ! Beware da Chili !
why must you abuse my bum ..you sexy mum ...
-Atlas
I like the pacing in this story, with the caracteres slowly getting close to each other rather than jumping to the bed.
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GAAAAAH!!! WHAT THE HELL MAX!?!?!?
Why must you tease me so with the checkers scene!? WHY!?!?
7182236 When it comes to smut, I like a little plot with the plot.
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WRONG KIND OF TEASE!!!
BUT STILL FUNNY THO...
7182255 Oh, I know what tease you're talking about...
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The anticipation! It is making me nuts!
"I am writing a chapter today"
"No chapter tomorrow"
GODDAMIT. Why must you cock tease me so?
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I can't wait for the fun to start. Loving this so far, though.
The gutter i cant get out of it!
Oh man. Twilight Velvet is awesome :3
this is good
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Dear god, steam should be shooting out of his ears by now!
Well, his ears if we're lucky...
Nice way to build up things.
Not just HORNY SON HORNY MOM IMMEDIATE FUCKING CUM CUM JOY.
It's nice to see a such a thing with a plot.
~Skeeter The Lurker
It's like fine dining. Build up the anticipation and then tuck into bliss.
7182243 As do I
Blackie? Were you hungry when you wrote that chili? It was pretty... Detailed.
For a second I thought this was food smut!
MadMax, you have thoroughly turned off my libido... by thoroughly turning on my heart.
My anticipations for future clop elements have been forcefully changed from excited to saddened.
Your characterization game is too powerful for this genre of clop!
7182260 I have but one very quick question, what do you think the next chapter will be available?
That chili made me hungry... dang it.
Nice chapter! Keep it up!
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YES YES slow and sweet.
Oh how I love it when romance > sex, save it for later Max. More feels, more happy memory, make her smile, make us adore her.
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Can you blame him? Chili is awesome.
7184744 I would never blame him for that
I'm vary happy you write more of this story please keep up a good work update soon
7182064 Yeah, same for me, but with battleship. I swear, that woman can read my mind.
At first I read the description and I was all like "Oh hell no!"
But then I saw that it was by MadMaxtheBlack and I was all like "Oh hell yes!"
Will read later.
7185532 Didn't realize that I was a big deciding factor on these sort of things.
7184742 It looks like some of them are just sayin' ''bap bap bap''
7185543 Yeah... I'm kind of in the same boat, lol. My thought process was along the lines of, "Oh, clop in the feature box. Surprise. Oh wait, hey... Madmaxtheblack... Well I should check it out." I'd say you are to this site what cake is to Jim Gaffigan.
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To be fair though, at first glance of the description I thought the main character was Shining Armor. I'm not super into that. The Twilight Velvet part. There's nothing wrong with the character in general.
This is awesome! More please!
The amount of cute is doubled!
7185543 It happens to me as well from my viewers, and I do judge other stories from certain authors.
I guess it is because we expect a certain kind of story from that author. For me you know you get mostly comedy and clop mixed with fetishes.
Kind of like when you see a movie by Quentin Tarantino, you usually know what you are getting into.
7185543 When you make a couple of my favourite stories, I tend to be a bit more trusting of what stories you produce.
7185623 MadMaxtheBlack seems to be simultaneously shameless with the stories he writes and somehow thoughtful enough to make them really good. He writes smut that develops the relationship of the characters before the clop, making the story fun to read even if you skipped what would otherwise be the main attraction.
7186884 Just realized I wasn't already following you. Just fixed that mistake.
when will the clop cum?
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I used to do a trick with the kids with glasses, if the looked at the board to close I could see where all of their ships were, after that no one played with me
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7187889 When the time cums. When the time cums...
Okay. I'm done.
Stratego is the shit! I would love to play that!
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Puns at their finest.
This is absolutely brilliant. Onward and upward!!! ALONS-Y!!!!
Let the Netflix-and-chill begin!
It must be a pain in the butt to have your ears constantly move and fold with your emotion. It always tells everypony else if you're mad, sad, or whatever. You'd never be able to keep it to yourself.