Sometimes I feel wonder why I like this story so much, when I hate other clopfics. Then a chapter like this comes out and it makes me remember that it's actually trying to tell a story, and that it's not just "Look at all the over-sexualized characters!"
Fondue huh? I give it three more posts before someone makes a Captain America reference.
On a side note, this chapter definitely made me hungry, so it's a good thing I'm eating lunch right now, hahaha! And that restaurant sounds really good too, reminds me of the time I went to a buffet and brought a whole tray of foodstuffs to sizzle. I bit into half of the food so I could sizzle the insides cigar style, it works pretty good actually.
7228644 If I can make someone hungry AND horny, then I'm doin' mah job!
7228772 I know random bits of Spanish yet I'm not a Spanish speaker. I can ask where the bathroom is. I can say there's a party in my pants. Just because someone isn't fluent doesn't mean they don't know some words.
7229203 I know how to ask for the bathroom in Spanish, Russian, German, French, English, and Greek. I also know how to order another beer in all those languages, and how to cuss someone out.
I am not pregnant but... I want chocolate and strawberry right now !
I really love that fiction ! Because it is funy, sexy, cute, and romantic. And I know about romance, because I am french. That is a cliché. But "cliché" is a french word ! So all in all, that makes sens, somehow.
By the way, what happened to the maître d'hôtel ? XD He loses his hôtel ?! XD
By the way, do you have a paypal or other way so your fans may tip you ? Because I am a fan...
Well, I am very happy that I strated reading your fic Mad boy.
Of course, with him being a unicorn and you a pegasus, the suit wasn’t really designed with wings in mind. That is, until Velvet took a pair of scissors and cut two slits into the back of it.
“Shining won’t mind. He’s outgrown it anyways,” she tells you. “Besides, I’ll patch it up later. No problem. He’ll never know.”
Meanwhile in the Crystal Empire: "AAAAAAHHHHH!!! So! Much! Pain!!" "I told you voodoo isn't a good idea; even if you are merely using your prom suit."
Eyes sparkling, you watch as she places down fresh strawberries, blondies, banana slices, pineapple slices, marshmallow, pound cake, brownies, and cheesecake.
Well this is a great read but I feel that 3k words aren't enough. Your chapter that went over 4k was a better read because it let you elaborate more on the scene and their thoughts.
“Ever heard of fondue?” Velvet asks, picking up one of her metal sticks in her hoof. She spears a piece of bread on it before dipping it into the melted cheese. A few seconds later, she removes the cheese-soaked bread and places it daintily in her mouth.
Bug Pusspuss? Got it!
Unrelated note, I actually had to go buy strawberries. Well done sir.
Sometimes I feel wonder why I like this story so much, when I hate other clopfics. Then a chapter like this comes out and it makes me remember that it's actually trying to tell a story, and that it's not just "Look at all the over-sexualized characters!"
I SHALL BOTHER HIM.
HAPPILY.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Nice chapter, its good to not have a sex scene every chapter; and this also develops the story more. Can't wait for the next chapter!
7228437 Agreed.
Another excellent chapter by Herr Maxx.
Shouldn't it be without?
Gotta say, that the menu described made me hungry.
It's like the spiritual successor of Like Mother Like Daughter.
This was good
Fondue huh? I give it three more posts before someone makes a Captain America reference.
On a side note, this chapter definitely made me hungry, so it's a good thing I'm eating lunch right now, hahaha! And that restaurant sounds really good too, reminds me of the time I went to a buffet and brought a whole tray of foodstuffs to sizzle. I bit into half of the food so I could sizzle the insides cigar style, it works pretty good actually.
And now I want fondue but all those restaurants are closed
ONWARD TO BUG SIR PUSSPUSS!!!
fondue now, and "fondue" later...howard stark eat your heart out.
>tfw I was trying to commission Pusspuss for a piece of Twilight Velvet a few months back.
Still keepin up the ol' food porn, eh Blackie?
Well I'm not complaining! Its sounds absolutely delicious!
I can't wait to see what Velvet plans on doing
there's a place in Portland Oregon like this, it's called the Melting Pot. don't think i didn't notice!
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a bit later than 3 posts, but here you go.
7228707 god damn it man
I thought it was a bit weird he just randomly knew French in the middle of the chapter but-
Oh who am I kidding, I can't even say I'm reading for the plot anymore.
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Liar! The plot is the best part!
I really really hope the next chapter has clop as delicious as the food Velvet and Anon just ate.
A glorious night it is!!
Mate... I swear... You've made my mouth water... And not even because of Velvet!
Damn it, you did make me hungry... I has no food either Dx //sobs//
Good show!
7228606 HUZZAH! with haste.
I do love chocolate and strawberry's.
as to bugging Pusspuss it has bean a while since I chatted with him it is long over doo.
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
7228771 yo, are you stalking me you crazy dingo fucker? whats up man!
7228644 If I can make someone hungry AND horny, then I'm doin' mah job!
7228772 I know random bits of Spanish yet I'm not a Spanish speaker. I can ask where the bathroom is. I can say there's a party in my pants. Just because someone isn't fluent doesn't mean they don't know some words.
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It's going to be a long strenuous night.
Commence read.
As someone that has never had fondue, it made me interested.
7229203 I know how to ask for the bathroom in Spanish, Russian, German, French, English, and Greek. I also know how to order another beer in all those languages, and how to cuss someone out.
Keep up the good work sir, well done. I'll actually be sad to see this story end.
Chapter review : 4 stars Food porn, reread recommended.
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I am not pregnant but... I want chocolate and strawberry right now !
I really love that fiction ! Because it is funy, sexy, cute, and romantic.
And I know about romance, because I am french. That is a cliché. But "cliché" is a french word ! So all in all, that makes sens, somehow.
By the way, what happened to the maître d'hôtel ? XD
He loses his hôtel ?! XD
By the way, do you have a paypal or other way so your fans may tip you ?
Because I am a fan...
Well, I am very happy that I strated reading your fic Mad boy.
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I can see how those particular phrases would work well together. Not necessarily in the same moment, but the same visit surely.
Hungry for the next chapter! Anyways have fun doing the next chapter!
Meanwhile in the Crystal Empire:
"AAAAAAHHHHH!!! So! Much! Pain!!"
"I told you voodoo isn't a good idea; even if you are merely using your prom suit."
I somehow misread that.
Nice chapter.
I'm curious for this "more~~~".
Well, I have my orders... To Pusspuss' page!
7228899 Which plot?
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Any plot, really. Nice ass, big, virile balls, even a nice plump pair of winking mare lips.
7229506 I don't have a paypal, but I do have a Patreon account.
Well this is a great read but I feel that 3k words aren't enough. Your chapter that went over 4k was a better read because it let you elaborate more on the scene and their thoughts.
Lul me and some friends are going to a place like that to celebrate the end of school... now I can't wait even more.
Season 6 reverence!
I swear.
This story has more food porn than an episode of Hell's Kitchen.
10/10 IGN approved.
7230294 Ok then. I was thinking plot as in story, but that works too.
Nice sweet date. I hope this will have a happy ending. I know this relationship isn't appropriate technically, but I sort of like these two together.