Okay, so the wheels fell of the shipping truck... But that's okay! Things can get fixed! There can't be that many potholes (plotholes?) in the road of relationships! Right? Right??
Somebody call Cadance! I don't care what you call her, just don't call her Shirley!
On another note, am I the only one thinking that Velvet's a lot naughtier than she seemed to be? Considering that she just admitted to still being fully aware while she was giving a teenager a blowjob and treated it like it was more or less no big deal? I for one would very much like to see what would happen if she decided to get more serious about it. Unf.
What? She wants to go shopping with me as her company?... I hope she tries on clothes! Then I can complement her on her looks, show her stuff she might look good in, and try to sweet-talk her into more se-wait, that won't work. Damnit! She's a beautiful mature woman, and she's either putting up barriers or removing them! I want them down! I want the smart and experienced woman in my life, but I don't know what to do!... Plus, I'm sixteen which means I'm a total p***y... If only I could make her understand that I don't just want sex, I want to fill in a gap that she's missing. She seems like somepony who needs somepony, especially after the comment on her liking that she woke up with somepony next to her. I want to do this more than just this night! I want to hold her as she dreams. I want to hold her tightly if she's having a nightmare! Loving is what I got to give to her...
The words tumble and swirl, forming a path from which there is no return. Heed my warning traveler, think not of the forbidden fruit, and it's succulent flesh. That path Leeds only to ruin and shame.
7196824 I dont see any reason why not... "Mmm chili!" *fapfapfap* "Oooo blowies!" *fapfapfap* Real question is, what gets you harder (Im callin it the chili)
Yeah... hate to break it to you kid, but your hoof is gonna be vying for permanent residence in your mouth for the rest of your life. At least when it comes to girls anyways.
I just like to remember what a historian once said on TV. "Mankind could climb the highest mountain, we could explore our deepest seas and conquer space but one thing would always bring us back to earth....Love."
Cannot wait for the next chapter and the rest of the story because I am loving the story so far. I laughed in some parts just because I laugh when ever I got an awkward moment coming up.
Staring down at your last pancake, you stare at it as if hoping it would reveal the answers you seek. When it remains silent, you sigh before cramming the whole thing in your mouth in one bite.
7197453 It's a quote(paraphrase, actually) from Austin Powers III: Goldmember. Dr. Evil describes his submarine in such a way as to be a thinly veiled innuendo.
And I would have hoped I wouldn't need to explain the joke, as that removes the humor, but...
You face heats up again and your ears lay back against you head, but you don’t deny it. Although it does sound bad when she says it like that.
should be 'your'
Also, good story, clop-wise. Don't take it the wrong way but I find very few clop stories with engaging plot and this feels a little too... cliche I suppose. Still, don't fix it if it ain't broke
You know what? I like how you're handling this. It's about as realistic as a relationship like this could be handled, with her not wanting to go through with it but also clearly having complicated emotions.
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Hmmmm.
I ship it, awkward relationship, nice~
Good work Maxy~
Commence read.
Hm...wonder how they shall try and make it work out.
Feelings. Always muddying up the waters.
Stop lying to yourself Velvet, we all know you want this as much as he does...
Okay, so the wheels fell of the shipping truck... But that's okay! Things can get fixed! There can't be that many potholes (plotholes?) in the road of relationships! Right? Right??
Somebody call Cadance! I don't care what you call her, just don't call her Shirley!
7196627 You can't sink a ship... if it's already under water!
Well, that was better that what I expected
Don't fight it Velvet, you and I both know it's impossible to resist the desires of the heart... among other parts of your anatomy.
The hips don't lie, brother. The hips don't lie.
On another note, am I the only one thinking that Velvet's a lot naughtier than she seemed to be? Considering that she just admitted to still being fully aware while she was giving a teenager a blowjob and treated it like it was more or less no big deal? I for one would very much like to see what would happen if she decided to get more serious about it. Unf.
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Yepyepyep
What? She wants to go shopping with me as her company?... I hope she tries on clothes! Then I can complement her on her looks, show her stuff she might look good in, and try to sweet-talk her into more se-wait, that won't work. Damnit! She's a beautiful mature woman, and she's either putting up barriers or removing them! I want them down! I want the smart and experienced woman in my life, but I don't know what to do!... Plus, I'm sixteen which means I'm a total p***y... If only I could make her understand that I don't just want sex, I want to fill in a gap that she's missing. She seems like somepony who needs somepony, especially after the comment on her liking that she woke up with somepony next to her. I want to do this more than just this night! I want to hold her as she dreams. I want to hold her tightly if she's having a nightmare! Loving is what I got to give to her...
7196708 Those be foal bearing hips!! How old exactly is she in this portrayal Max?
The words tumble and swirl, forming a path from which there is no return. Heed my warning traveler, think not of the forbidden fruit, and it's succulent flesh. That path Leeds only to ruin and shame.
Also to happiness.
Jeezzz boi! Youre really into that food cooking/eating description aint'cha?
No worries, your secret is safe w/ me
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7196790 I'm very food oriented. It's usually the deciding factor for if I go somewhere with friends or family, or not.
7196805 I was reading the chapter w/ the dinner scene to my friends and they were wondering if this was smut or just food porn
7196819 Can't it be both?
7196824 I dont see any reason why not...
"Mmm chili!" *fapfapfap*
"Oooo blowies!" *fapfapfap*
Real question is, what gets you harder (Im callin it the chili)
7196829 Actually, it's tacos and nachos. Delicious, delicious tacos and nachos.
7196845 well I'll be! You DO got good tastes
Few things are more awkward than the conversation after casual sex. Accidental sex is even more so.
Velvet the S-MILF
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...So, a submarine, then? Y'know what I mean; long, hard, and full of se
amen?Ah. Fortune pancakes. Sorry to say that only works with cinnamon pancakes. Tough luck.
Yeah... hate to break it to you kid, but your hoof is gonna be vying for permanent residence in your mouth for the rest of your life. At least when it comes to girls anyways.
Or maybe... it's Haybelline.
They better get together, please tell me they do. Please. PLEASE! SHE IS GOING TO LOVE HIM!
I just like to remember what a historian once said on TV. "Mankind could climb the highest mountain, we could explore our deepest seas and conquer space but one thing would always bring us back to earth....Love."
Little mistakes:
- and it doesn’t take you long to release that she’s
- I don’t see my mom, if that makes since
Nice to see some more focus on the why's and how's of the situation!
7197154 *<>* how the hell did an Ad make it onto the comment feed ....?
~ don't mind him that was funny
*realize
7197030 the feck breh
Come on velvet if i smell like your husband then make me your husband
Cannot wait for the next chapter and the rest of the story because I am loving the story so far. I laughed in some parts just because I laugh when ever I got an awkward moment coming up.
I swear to everything that is holy, I actually liked this. BUT ITS NOT MY FETISH
Please leave me alone *Sobbing*
I wonder now if he/she will remeber to wash the bed sheets...
'Holds a cup o, life walks over to the sink pours it in the sink ' " It all just went down the drain''
Immersion is so much easier when you use quotes I have said in the past, but not with wings and instead with the more masculine anatomy.
Don't believe their lies about the future.
Obscure references ho!
7196679 And if it's a submarine, what do I do then?
plus one sin this scene did not contain a lap dance.
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I was more thinking of What I Got from Sublime.
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It's a quote(paraphrase, actually) from Austin Powers III: Goldmember. Dr. Evil describes his submarine in such a way as to be a thinly veiled innuendo.
And I would have hoped I wouldn't need to explain the joke, as that removes the humor, but...
should be 'your'
Also, good story, clop-wise. Don't take it the wrong way but I find very few clop stories with engaging plot and this feels a little too... cliche I suppose. Still, don't fix it if it ain't broke
7200172 No, I get the joke, it's just that I wasn't expecting it.
And I'll probably use it some time
I have to say I am really really enjoying this. Between laughs and ... stuffs, it is set up for a really damn good story.
7202153 Oh but of course! This is my unf. If you know what I mean.
You know what? I like how you're handling this. It's about as realistic as a relationship like this could be handled, with her not wanting to go through with it but also clearly having complicated emotions.
Been there, done that