A war breaks out between Dragons and Wolves. But what will happen when you're both wolf and dragon?
One can only pick one side....
Rated T for violence and multable uses of profanity.
Losing my mind, and proud of it!
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Way too fast paced and short but besides that it is pretty good just try to put some more meat on those bones if you get what I'm saying
Andrewlou4 out see yu
A bit disjointed as a 3rd person account...
What I mean is that It reads very much like a train of thought as opposed to a third person limited narrative. Have you ever considered writing 1st person perspective? I think your writing style would lend towards that kind of narrative.
I wanna see where this goes
7142159 Finally! A positive comment!
7142165 I like it so far. I can understand the writing so I can imagine the story and it has been awhile since I read anything so it's nice to get back into reading again ^^
7142173 Perhaps because you're the only one that can.
7142177 Cheer up BlackSilver
That cover art is really off-putting and the summary comes off a little tired. If you're trying to attract readers, those two things aren't gonna help.