A Long Time Coming

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Princess Celestia has been keeping a secret from Twilight Sparkle. When confronted with her student's confession, she finds she can no longer keep quiet.

Cover Art by :TwilightFlopple
Prereading/editing thanks to:totallynotabrony

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DivinePanzer

DivinePanzer #1 · Apr 20th, 2016 · · ·

"Hey look, Twilight has a scroll in her mouth! Let's read it!"

Leonzilla

Leonzilla #2 · Apr 20th, 2016 · · ·

and with a puckish smile, threw one of the cakes at Twilight’s face. Immediately she felt terrible, her mood worsening. Even in her mind the justification of wanting Twilight to treat her like a pony rung so very hollow.
“W-w-what was that for!”

...hum, to be funny?

Sealing Discord in stone, only to discover years later that he had already corrupted Sombra.

Head-canon?

Celestia, Diarch of the Sun, had faced down many things in her long life. Discord, Sombra, Nightmare Moon, and Tiamat were but a few of the notable foes she had triumphed over.

Tiamat?

“Like Tartarus I am!” Celestia screamed. "I'm worthless!"

Hum... when you put it that way, taking away any credit she has as a good mentor and ruler all the major actions she has done in the series have either been a mistake or a failure.

It wasn’t until she was relaxing in the bath that it dawned on her that Twilight Sparkle just pranked her

You call that a prank? That's not a prank.

She was already washing herself anyway.

~Leonzilla

DivinePanzer

DivinePanzer #3 · Apr 20th, 2016 · · ·

7144605 I don't recall them ever stating what happened to Sombra. Not really head canon so much as just backstory for this story.

Tiamat? You know, Queen of Dragons? D&D reference is subtle indeed.

Yea, making stuff up to justify the main thrust of my story isn't the best idea.

Titanium Dragon

Titanium Dragon #4 · Mar 10th, 2017 · · ·

I reviewed this story as part of Read It Later Reviews #69.

My review can be found here.

Jatheus

Jatheus #5 · Jun 14th, 2019 · · ·

There are a few things in this that felt understated and unclear to me, which I was able to figure out, but. I think the story would benefit from a pinch more exposition to flesh them out and increase clarity.

I'm not a fan of shipping in general, and may not have read this at all if I had gained a sense if what it was from the description.

However, I have to say you have skills as a writer, and you definitely get points for vocabulary... nobody uses impugn anymore, and they should.

Write on, my friend!