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SapphireSparks


The art of writing is the art of discovering what you believe.

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Four alicorns to unite the races and protect the kingdom of Equestria. That's how the old legend goes. Years after its creation two sisters are born, one an alicorn and the other a unicorn. One became angry at the other's actions, and ended up sealing the fate for the two with a spell that had unforeseen consequences...

Years later when Celestia is a name all but forgotten to the flames of the sun, Luna is on a desperate hunt for any signs of her sister. Cadence and Flurry Heart have been born while Luna still believes Celestia is the fourth alicorn of the age old story, unbeknownst to her the dark secrets that lie with her sister's wings, and a very important mare hidden in the streets of Canterlot... But nobody's panicking. Right?

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Comments ( 11 )

cool story bro. keep it up. I expect 1,000,000 words by tomorrow.

7342457 fuck you I'll write 2,000,000

But thanks :twilightsmile:

7342460 I'll be keeping you to that!

~ Chapter: 13

DUDE!!!!!!!!!! That's so cool!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Um hey I was wondering if you were um.... going to give me credit? for um editing....
its fine if you don't...sorry:pinkiesad2:

the story is really good and I would love to read ch2, cant wait to reait really.
hope to read more ch and others storys you make so please keep up the alwosme work

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Huh, It was really weird in the middle there, but the ending turned out awesome!

So um, why is this marked as complete? I’m getting conflicting messages from the chapter title. You can’t have ‘just a prologue’.

I’m with 8443398 . The description sounds like it’s going to be a bit longer than 8k words, and there’s no sequel too...
Alas, I’m gonna have to label this one dead without further explanation.

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