Luna has been holding onto some items with memories attached to them, and it's time she got rid of them and moved on.
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They.
Its. (This mistake is repeated a couple of times.) It's is short for It Is, and Its is the possessive form.
Those were.
Never to be.
Of.
Repetition of Thought. Trying throwing in something like Ideas/Concepts/Concerns, etc, to spruce it up a bit.
Apostrophe is unneeded, and this error is repeated a couple of times.
Something missing here?
Lovely story. I think you captured Luna rather well.
Added to Sad Luna.