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TheEvilCookie


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Nice little being story!!!

7019585 Thank you. I'm really trying hard to improve my story writing as you can tell from my older stories my writing isn't that great but this I think is an improvement. :)

7019599 You are doing a good job! I have read all your stories . You just need to work on your ?flow"

Comment posted by TheEvilCookie deleted Mar 11th, 2016

7019620 Thank you so much! I'm happy I'm improving! I worked hard on this story. What do you think of my other stories? :) Your honest opinion please. I'll try to work on the flow and pacing of my stories yes.

Comment posted by Fracturedheart deleted Apr 12th, 2016
Comment posted by TheEvilCookie deleted Apr 12th, 2016
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Comment posted by TheEvilCookie deleted Apr 12th, 2016

This was an amazing story, and it seems like something Fluttershy would do. That makes it even better, thank you for writing it!:yay:

7601850 I'm glad you enjoyed it. Fluttershy does seem like she would hide her wound in the show because she would be to shy to say what happened. Thanks!

It's a nice story but it seems more sad then drama. That's just me though.

7799545 Yeah that's probably because I should have put that tag there but i didn't think about it because I sometimes get confused about which genre I'm writing. I'm pretty sure it's drama but I could have put the sad tag there

7803141 It's OK either way. Just something worth noting

The gossip Twi & Shy were talking about: Hey did you know that somehow Nurse Red heart is the only well known pony in the hospital so now she works for both roles of doctor and nurse?

Red Heart the rest of the day: :twilightangry2:

:rainbowlaugh:

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