Just someone who has no idea what they are doing.
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Discord. He may think his 'pranks' are harmless, but they are a nuisance. Especially lately! After his latest prank, Twilight insists that he's gone too far. He promises to cut back, but with a catch: he get's to unleash one final grand prank, but only against her. Twilight Sparkle. She obviously finds it suspicious, but she is so fed up with him that she hastily agrees.
She wishes she hadn't.
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The fact the letters were rearranged into a cohesive set of stories on a particular topic is most impressive. I'm interested in seeing where this rift leads.
Great Story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
I will be looking forward to reading more of this. Please post the next chapter soon.
Oooo I'm excited for the next one! :)
This is certainly a decent chapter, and it has a nice hook at the end to make readers excited for the upcoming ones.
My only gripe with this is the way you presented information in the blurb of your story, or the long description of your story on the front page, which already provides spoilers for what we should expect when Discord pranks Twilight. If I were you, I'd modify it such that Discord managed to convince Twilight to go through with the deal but not provide any specific details about what would occur later.
All in all, it's decent.
7300192 Hmm, good suggestion. I'm not great with providing hooks to stories, so the feedback is welcome. It did come a bit late, though, since I'm thinking about putting all my fics on hiatus. I just can't find any motivation, even though I have ideas. I have 2k words written for the next chapter, but I haven't worked on it since march.
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Try putting "She wishes she hadn't." in a new paragraph. It emphasises the fact that she regrets the decision she had made in the heat of the moment.
7302796 Funny you should mention that, because I almost did that. I decided not to, but looking over it again it seems I should have.