It will probably not SEEM so rushed when you get a few more chapters out.
Seriously, so few chapters into the story and unless you’re doing 10,000+ word chapters world building is usually only getting started

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BEFORE I HAVE TROLLESTIA FORCE YOU TO WATCH JUSTIN BIEBER'S ENTIRE ALBUMS!!

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Oh reeeaaaly? I'd love to see her try when I have a Voiture Lumiere System. It turns solar energy into thrust, so the closer she gets, the faster
I will go. It will be like putting two magnets of the same charge towards each other.

To be honest I can help you with editing and proof reading if you want, I don't have much in terms of things to do. Just work on my own stories and that doesn't take up much of my time.

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I already have one guy looking it over, but go ahead. Just leave a review of what you noticed in case the other guy missed something.

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Um... I accidentally broke that. I was trying to make it like the nepteight version.

But if you try to hunt me down, I will unleash the power of the Barbatos Lupus Rex that I have modified the armor to house the psychoframe technology. It still has the Alaya-Vijnana System.

hay do more chapters