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Wolf123313
I try to write stories that feel immersive. I may write femdom while also including an epic storyline in some form.
Wolf123313
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No.
Yes.
maybe
Rushed
Amazing chapter
Wow, didn't expect 5 comments on the first try. XD And, yeah, I was trying to rush it out and I was also trying to do the best first chapter I could. Still, keep an eye out for chapter 2, I promise it will be even better and what I promise I'll make sure I do.
this one looks similar to some other fanfics and its a little fast paced.
you've got enough plot packed into this for about a half-dozen chapters.
Beyond that, t's fine.
6649188 I think you did a good job, I liked the chapter. Just try not to rush the chapters a little and you'll do fine. But other than that I like the story. Keep up the good work!
P.S, when's the next chapter coming out?
6680577 Well, I have a bit of work since I was on hiatus for about a week and I didn't have the computer with my save file. All I've gotta say is the next chapter will be out when it's finished. Still, thanks for the feedback.
Just a quick update, I'm going on hiatus due to some messy business in real life.
I can't say when I'll be back writing. I do have a good number of things for the second chapter saved. I'll be back when I'm better and when I get inspiration.
It's not too bad but your going a little too quickly there.
one word for this story, "Editor." you need one.
I assume this story is dead?