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Sir lightning blade


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Your story description tells me nothing about the fic itself, apart from why the tags are used and the fetishes involved. Please remedy this and make a decent synopsis, because I feel I am not the only one who is turned away from reading your fic due to the wall-of-texty 'description' you use.

This feels like someone described what mlp and a clopfic is to an alien and then forced them to write one.

For some reason, I feel like English is not your first language.

6930692 Actually it is my first language, although I think my computers, first language is not that. It also doesn't help when you have dyslexia

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The dyslexia explains a whole lot.

6935122 At least I don't have Percy Jackson version though! It's bad enough that I flunk German, considering my last name means to help in German! Mine is just the vacant system. Which means basically my good days are I can remember to spell incredibly complicated words, my bad days are, having trouble remembering four letter words. And I don't mean the curse words I mean literally just four letters long like the number four!

Started reading saw the word Elerium and instantly thought X-Com

6994137 GOOD I had to find ridiculous powers are somewhere and I've been watching X-com crazy. Besides it's slightly more believable that it would be that then something from the other universes. After all, I don't want to bring in Superman into this, he's way too broken, as it is that we add him as a pony magical unicorn Princess, and well we can now safely say no one can beat him.

Please use your built-in spell check. Seriously.

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That is still apparently not true. Get an editor.

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What's the Percy Jackson version?

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Percy Jackson:The reason why he has trouble reading, and apparently he translates the normal English language into ancient Greek. And that's all it somehow means that he can read ancient Greek.

Not read yet but have to pinot out logical fallacy most start college at 18 or 19 assuming that most universe they go they are still in America the most likely age to drink alcohol is 21, granted they are old enough to smoke and consent to sex. But the only ones old enough to drink is the Equestrian members of the group. Pony Twilight approximate age is late 20s early 30's despite how she looks in Equestria Girls, and Sunset is older then her by at least a year or two. So with a Magical Equestria id they could maybe get smashed if they like. And the bar tenders don't question the id.

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