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Yeah its in fimfiction hope to see more. :-)
6914886 me too im so glad
oh...my...god...THIS IS AWESOME
6915117 I know right? Never judge a book or a fanfic by it's cover/votes of like/dislike and description!
Why so many dislikes? I think it's pretty good.
Although, I did notice some grammar errors. Improper punctuation, unneeded capitalizations, etc.
Example:
6915188 I also make that question!
Probably so those who are favoriting it can have it all to themselves because the more Favorite Ah get the more dislikes come!
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I know the feeling.Anyway, I hope to read more of this soon.
Good to see this story being resurrected. I have high hopes for it, and I'm looking forward to the story's progression. I'm not a big fan of a pony version of Spike
but that's not important. Keep it up 
i wonder why most hate it...huh...oh well back to my closet...
It could use more work with the shooting scene, I imagined them just standing there shooting at each other with out taking cover or any thing. Just them standing shooting at each other and also an rpg cant be fired from a van due to the shot that comes from the back after it's been fired.
Be sides that this seems interesting
6916323 sorry it's my first time writting an action scene, so I still trying my best but this is Saints Row we're talking about, nothing makes sense when it comes to shooting.
6917127 True very true. It is a video game and the enemy's are just NPC's after all can't really describe it and even if you can it wont make sense
6917409 just the first cutscene os the 1st SR doesn't make a buckin' sense, the Carnales could've already gunned down all the VK and Rollerz and all they did was hit headshots with 300 bullets.
6921693 yea I guess more then half have to be blanks or something