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Rakoon1
I'm a Portuguese author who wants to share his stories.
Rakoon1
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I already disliked homosexual Clopfiction, and you pairing it with adultery and rubbish grammar (It didn't seem as though English was your first language) and I dislike it even more.
On the constructive criticism side of things (Meaning things you need to change): Your dialog seemed unrealistic and forced. You made multiple mistakes that made it look like you used either Google translate or Google auto corrections in many areas. And last, but not least, the characters didn't act like themselves at all.
Overall, this was rubbish/10. I hope your other 19 stories are better than this, grammatically speaking.
>Big Mac just didn’t get enough dick and ass
fuck, okay, this killed me
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Why even read it if you don't like homosexual clopfiction?
6849747 I am a proud scout of The Knights of the Something Table 1 and 2, it's part of my job unfortunately...
I have no idea what possessed me to click this and then read it twice.
Premise could have been funny, but ultimately didn't lead up to anything. It was very clearly poorly translated into English. In fact:
you left in some Portuguese.
Oh my god, this is almost spiderses level of bad.
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You take that back. Spiderses is a work of blessed art. The kind of art which is bigger and eight.