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CeresBane


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Pinkie Pie is out on the prowl and no pony is safe from her deathly touch. Everypony can run or fight for their lives. But their souls belong to the eternal party, to the war for Equestria that never seems to end.

This is a story illustrating one of the many ways the cult of Discord goes to war and the glimpse of how powerful Pinkie Pie is in the battlefield.

Disclaimer: this is a War for Equestria group story. Link is found below for more information on the universe and fanon.

http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=group&group=703

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

If you want to see all the stories involving her, either look through my profile or join/visit the War for Equestria group to get regular updates.

Badly written, needs someone to go over it. Some serious grammar errors.
Nice idea.
No upvote or downvote from me.

On a side note, what's up with you guys and this obsession with dark fanfics?

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Pinkie's just on the side of evil in my NLR vs SE fanon. that sunny demeanour is way too unnatural to be good.

People seem to like the Twilight one though. No idea why, I consider that one more poorly written than this.

I don't get it....why are people dissin the "part 2" and "part 3"? When they were together, it was mainly thumbs up, so what happened? Or is it because they are considered new stories and were jugded by different people? So are the mysteries of "The Audience".......

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I thought a good 2 hours about it and concluded that the stories aren't really related enough to be part of one anthology.
It's like saying every single story involving I dunno spike the dragon should be all put into one story. and I intend to make a bucket load of "demon of laughs" stories. Likely too many to be held on a single story.

I will have to add a disclaimer to read the "demon of laughs" for new readers to get it. No big deal. Lesson learned.

I belive all readers should actually check the writers OTHER stories out first, before reading the one that caught thier eye. It gives a more full view to the writers history and, as in this case, verifies if there is a prequel to the others.

I would add the disclaimer, but a true "reader/critic/opinionator/whateverthehellyouare"shouldn't need one and will read the first stories FIRST. This entire comment is aimed at you readers........ Learn from it.......if thats ok with you:fluttershysad:

Lol, good story, buuuuuuuut.... The chapters were a little long for me and made my brain hurt... nothing against! I'm just saying that i'm stupid! lol :twilightsheepish: :facehoof:

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