When Rainbow Dash becomes Captain of the Wonderbolts, tradition mandates that Spitfire tell her the story of the Failure of Swiftwing, the first captain of the Wonderbolts.
Pull up a cloud; it's storytime.
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bahatumay
Simultaneously able to type 94 wpm and still take five years to finish a story. If you're feeling generous, throw a ko-fi at me.
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Author's notes:
For some reason, when I tried to type “Spitfire”, my fingers would always hit “Spitfure”. Am I the only one this has happened to?
That ending.......LIKE A BOSS.
.........but that might just be me for all I know........
Alright,so overall, this was VERY original for a story, I mean many wanted to know this, and bam, here it is. The way you portrayed Spitfire and Soarin, was just......HILARIOUS and I think you captured Dash's reaction to her being the new Captain very well. Though the part where that white pegasus draped her wing over Spitfire made me think that something was going on with those 2, because she then said "You still can't leave me alone after all these years?" Which made my suspicions grow
I love Soarin (no homo.) He's just hilarious.
There's one tiny detail you forgot to put in here.
WHO IS THE WHITE PEGASUS!
you are sugjesting that it is rainbow but rainbow has a blue coat.
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I'll give you a hint: she's tagged in the character tags.
Or, you can read the deleted scene. That answers it too.
I liked how you put us right there with Rainbow Dash to hear the tale of Swiftwing. I loved his unfortunate "end"
I think it would be cool to see a sequel where RD takes on Celestia. I mean, she can also do the sonic rainboom, why not give it a go and redeem the Wonderbolts in the eyes of the Princesses? Plus, they can get some money out of it. Of course, I'll leave that you. Great story
That's not creepy at aaaallllllll... *poker face*
GIGGITY
My response to this would be along the lines of:
"Who the fuck is in my house and what the fuck are you doing here."
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I find those to be two very valid questions.
*spoilers*
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Ways the white pegasus should remind you of Celestia (from cover):
White coat
Pink mane and tail
Has this irritating little smirk as if she pulled some sort of prank behind their backs
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Exactly what I was going for.