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Angelic Wing


I am a writer... An artist uses lies to tell the truth, while politicians use them to conceal the truth... And I, like God, do not play with dice and do not believe in coincidence...

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Angelic Wing is but a Pegasus, who wishes for a fairy tale ending.... But does she want the fate that is in store for her? Can her captors darkened mind be brought back to the light by her hoof, holding his tortured soul? Can she chip away the barrier around the creatures heart?

There is some Fluttercord in this story, but it's mostly about my OC and fantasy that I've created in my head. There is a little sex and gore in this story, just small references, but I wanted to warn you.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 12 )

Consider me hooked! Must know more!!!! I think the reason no one is reading this is because most don't read things with an OC as the main character. I like Angelic Wings, however. Thus far, she has a very nice personality and is easily likable. I am definitely following.

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Omg thank you! You are the best! :pinkiehappy: Been trying for at least a month to think this story up, and published it today while still fixing the chapter:yay: the next chapter should be done tomorrow and the chapter afterwards maybe :twilightsmile:

6917899 Sweet! I'll be looking forward to it! :pinkiehappy:

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Just to let you know, I'm astonished that you made a post about me and my stories :pinkiegasp: I do appreciate it so much, but I'm just asking why?

6917922 I think you have real potential, and it bothers me that so few people seem to realize that. I don't have many followers myself, but I'm hoping some of them might take the time to look at your stuff. I know from experiences on other sites how hard it can be to keep up your motivation to write when hardly anyone seems to notice, and I don't want that to happen to you. Your stories inspired me, and I want them to inspire others as well. I suppose I just want people to appreciate your work. :twilightsmile::pinkiesmile:

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Very well said, MagicSquirrel :twilightsmile: My motivation comes even though it seems to flow through a silent stream that no sees :twilightblush: Sorry poetic side got out of me for a sec there :twilightsmile: I'm so glad that you were inspired by my stories and I really appreciate that you want others to see through your eyes :pinkiehappy:

6917976 You don't have to apologize. Poetic stuff is always welcome. I'm going to start working on my own fanfic tomorrow. Hearts of Tears gave me so many fantastic ideas!!!! I can't wait! I'd better get to bed now. It's past midnight where I live. Good night! :twilightsmile:

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I'll be waiting to read it with the utmost anticipation :twilightsmile: Goodnight :yay:

Sorry I'm so late in reviewing this! Life is demanding sometimes.
Nicely done! Black Flame is a really cool name. It just sort of rolls off your tongue. Black Flame... There is one thing I have to note: I really, really wanted a comment from Discord after Angelic blew up at him! Maybe something a little snarky, yet still showing his alarm at her reaction. I just felt like it was lacking a little in that area.

Woah, what is this dude? A wolf-like creature, huh? Hmm.....

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I kind of wanted to do that, but I wanted to try making him feel speechless at her reaction, to see what people thought :pinkiehappy:

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