((this is when I start to pretend to be bad))
wun day in ponyville de main 6 wer in de library and twaloght decide to summon de sexyest men aliv. but den blackveil brides arrive!!!!!!1!!!!!!11!one!111eleventy-one1!11
Den dere is pokeyman and princass calastia and luna r in luv squar with loki and thor, der will be loadssss of sexytime.
and also sherlock is thar as derpy hooves did sumthing wrong and he got transported to her kitchen. jawn luvs jam <3 <3 LOL!!!! ~
--Just a note, this is in no way meant to be serious. Just saying. Incase that wasn't clear from the title. GO read my other good fanfiction. Please. kthxbai.--
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Just saying, after re-reading this, my face is a mix of:
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and 
WHAT HAS SCIENCE DONE.
I'm thumbing this down, and here's why:
I get what you're trying to do here, but the horrendous grammar makes it darn near impossible to read. I know you're doing that on purpose for the sake of bashing the grammatically inept, but it makes the whole thing 20% harder to understand.
LOL, Alissa from Tekken 6.
This was a wonderful fic. Thank you for your contribution to Science.
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As a foreword I must say that I did not read this. That fact is the only reason I did not thumb it up or down. As a general criticism I find that these satirical type fics are the worst kind. No offence to anybody who likes those types of comedies; it's been over done people. Can't we just call it quits?
I accidently
the fanfic
I read the summary and the first thing that came to my mind...
DOLAN HAS INVADED FIMFICTION.
I was afraid to read it from there.
yyyy u do dis i has sssssssssaaaaaaaaaaadddddddddddddddddddddssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss nao yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
I know this was suppose to be terrible, but I still didn't think it was funny.
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Okay, here's the thing: Even if you're only pretending to be terrible, you're still being terrible.
Too terrible to be funny.
KILL IT WITH FIRE!!!
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OH MOTHER OF SWEET CELESTIA!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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Glad you found something funny in it. I honestly didn't.
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Fair enough. This wasn't even meant to be funny - not seriously anyway - just something me and a friend did for shits n' giggles.
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Thank you. I'm glad it has helped science. And yes, Alisa.
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I have to stress this was in no way meant to be taken seriously. Everything about this is a joke. I also haven't seen any other of these kind of fics here, but i've been away for a while. Maybe I missed them??
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I accidentally everything
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It wasn't meant to be funny. It never says that anywhere. If someone finds it funny, that's their sense of humour and not our interpretation of what is funny. And before telling me to 'Get The Fuck Out', please kindly read my other fanfictions which weren't sloppily written in half an hour in an attempt to be as bad and unfunny as possible. Thank you.
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Look at the above response. It was never meant to be funny. It's terrible for the...sake of being terrible? We kind of made this for a friend who wanted to see how bad we could make a fanfiction.
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Oh god, dolan. I used to find him funny, but then it got overused.
LONG COMMENT OVER!!
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I understand that it is in no way serious. I'm mearly saying that I find this type of comedy to be the least funny. Just my opinion
Also, yes there have been many similar to yours. People post stories that are purposefully bad, generic or cliche for "teh lulz." It was funny the first time but with each new story my distaste for the comedic material diminishes.
None of my comments are meant to make you feel bad or to critic your work obviously; just my opinions.
Note: I understand that I misunderstood your purpose for writing it. But, since people have been doing stories like this for the comedic value I will continue to refer to it as a "comedy." Just because you didn't write something to fall into a certain category doesn't mean it won't.
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Ah, okay then. I like hearing other peoples opinions on what I write, whether its serious or not. Thanks for sharing your views in a civilized manner :)
This fails as a trollfic.
this made me laugh
688568 Oh come on, here too?!
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Oh crap.
This is fucking brilliance.
Where's the part where everybody wears MCR t-shirts and slits their wrists, crying about how goffick they are?
"And then Celestia ran in and shouted 'What the hell are you doing you motherfuckers?'" XD
I read this in 5 minutes, this is so beautiful