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Lightning Crystal


Just a normal guy living a normal life, and that's all I could ever want

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Comment posted by Salted Pingas deleted Oct 28th, 2015

This looks cool, but it seems like updates are really slow. Dont know if I wanna track or read later. What do you think author?

6690146 update was slow this time because of how much editing was going on after I finished the chapter, and by the time I had finished editing it the first time, I was past my due date, so I pushed it back some, and began editing more, and then the cycle continued, but since it's now the middle of the week, and I finished the final edits on time, i posted, so I do highly think you should track it, and if I do have to push it back some, i'll put up a blog stating so

6690187 ill track it then. It looks like a cool story :twilightsmile:

prologue?
alright, let's roll.

"My dear son and daughter," a lab-coat wearing pony begins, "I want you two to live long happy lives. Though with the secrets we know. You can't." He grabs an orb, (details about orb?)

"Is this really the only way?" the mare standing by his side says, "Why can't we just run from the stable when it opens?"

"Because we can't. The stable is not going to open anytime soon. This is our only choice, for the good of Ponykind we must do this." He looks down at the two sleeping foals, and repeats, quietly, to himself, "for the good of all of us we have to do this."

eh. I'm going to open a google doc and just do the whole thing, but ya like this?

When is the next chapter coming out???????

6720357 Soon, but this next one is a long chapter, so maybe not for a while

6720719 my god man, when, when!!!!

you portrayed Shadow Moon really well

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