Fallout Equestria: Between wing and hoof

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DwarvishPony

DwarvishPony #1 · Oct 12th, 2015 · · · Chapter 1: Hoof meets Wing ·

It's an interesting start, if a bit generic. Granted, it is hard to create a unique start to a Fo:E sidefic at this point. I'd recommend making a prologue chapter or something along those lines. Even if it doesn't give context to the characters, I'd like to know a little bit about the area they're in.

I'll track this story to see where it goes. I'm hoping for some character development as the story progresses.

AlmanacP

AlmanacP #2 · Oct 16th, 2015 · · · Chapter 1: Hoof meets Wing ·

Your book has been advertised on the new facebook group page: https://www.facebook.com/groups/foebooks/ :)

Aeluna

Aeluna #3 · Feb 18th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1: Hoof meets Wing ·

It's nice to see a FoE story that isn't littered with typos from the get go, even if there are still a few here and there. Whatever the case, I know the pain of trying to write a Fallout crossover and putting your heart and soul into the tale, only to get unexplained hate and downvotes for it. Hence, I hope that my thumb up can help your story achieve what you want it to.

SilverStarApple