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TooShyShy


Fan fiction. The final frontier.

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Apple Bloom, Scootaloo, and Sweetie Belle, now three fully grown mares, have embraced a career path nopony else would have imagined: Private detectives in the city of Canterlot. Although this employment mostly offers them misplaced animals and slightly valuable teacups that reward them just enough to continue living in Canterlot, occasionally a more interesting case pops up. A murder, a jewel theft, the disappearance of somepony famous, or even a secret criminal organization.

Note: Cancelled due to my own lack of interest. I apologize for anyone who was looking forward to the next chapter. However, I feel this does better as a one-shot anyway.

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Comments ( 3 )

Wow, that was really good. You have quite the way with words and descriptions, let me tell you. And overall I quite enjoyed that, you've certainly made my favourites list with this story.

I can't help but wonder a few things though. First is Scootaloo's role in their mystery solving company. Yes the CMC are friends and all, but they're also adults, unless she brought something useful to the search, she'd probably sit out or be asked to. Applebloom was very clearly the one asking questions and noticing the small details. And Sweetie Belle was writing down everything said for future use in case something was forgotten. But aside from making breakfast, I couldn't help but notice Scootaloo brought little to the table.

My second curiosity is a more straightforward and expected one. In that, I'd like to know what Cutie Marks Sweetis Belle and Scootaloo got. It's not useful for the story. I'm just curious, being a CMC fan.

6510633 First off, thanks for your kind words :yay:

As for Scootaloo's role.... Let's just say that will be addressed sooner or later. As will the Cutie Marks of the other members of the CMC. This is only the first story. Future installments will delve a little deeper into things like that.

6514609 Ah, see there's the problem, I thought this was a one off. It ended on such a wrapped up note as far as I could tell.

Well, then consider yourself one fan higher today then yesterday. I await with baited breath. XD

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