Well, you see, Pinkie Pie was never really the same after Cheese’s visit. She, to put it simply, needed him. What would happen if Cheese wanted her to love him too? Here is that story.
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"If you want to be the best, you have to do things others aren't willing to do." -Michael Phelps #swimmer Live. Love. Pinkie Pie. #MLP "Move, ball." -Han Solo #starwarstfa "Love it. Do it." -Me
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I'm not trying to be a critic but why did just start crying all of a sudden. i mean i kno he misses pinkie, but hot damn he sure is random
That was the point. He's random. I like to think he missed her so much the second he started thinking about Pinkie he cried. Does that help?
I really like how Pinkie's "conversation" with Boneless was written. I could just see the pauses in my head.
It kind of feels like you put less effort into this one then the previous part? It feels a bit rushed in comparison.
*sigh* Yeah, that's what everyone is saying. I didn't want this chapter originally. It came to me in the form of a " this story is too short" message. Anyways, I don't like this chapter as much as the first one. But now that we have the intro out of the way, we can have the good stuff!
Thanks! I was talking as Boneless to get the feel for that little bit.
The newest chapter will come out every Saturday, if I can manage to.
6409444 Oh, OFP. What have you gotten yourself into? You can't do that! You are a PROCRASTINATOR. You wrote a poem about procrastination! You better not let fans down...
Yknow, I originally had Rainbow speaking in Rarity's place in that last scene, but figured Rarity would know more about love. And no, I won't tell you the plot if you haven't figured it out.
My friend asked me why there was a Discord and a CMC tag on the story. They will indeed play a part in the story.
Something tells me they're going to pair Twilight with Flash if she keep meddling.
6488874
MUHAHA!
YAY i love this ship! i mean they were made for each other
poor rainbow...
There will be saucy questions be warned.
Discord some times I just want to kill you
um when does it get to the fluttercord part ?
6546788 Later! I forshadowed it in CMC Shippers Go! and will expand later! Do you want me to take it out of the group until then?
I like how you portrayed Pinkie's feelings of missing Cheese Sandwhich. Why was Discord at Twilight's?
The chapter is quite funny but my only suggestion would have been to have Sweetie Belle plead Scootaloo and Apple Bloom a bit more to go along with the plan. That way, it would make sense why Scootaloo changed her mind and said okay as long as there are no love potions involved.
6547624 no
6548265 Not telling. No important plot details here! I will say it has to do with Fluttershy..
6548278 Thanks for the feedback!
NOT AT ALL REQUIRED READING. WAS BORED AND HAD TO POST A CHAPTER. EXPECT AN ACTUAL CHAPTER AROUND SUNDAY.
I wonder what happens next?
6623308 The latest chapter is almost done! You'll see soon.
If Pinkie liked Cheese, then why did she tell him she needed to think about it?
6644763 Uh, I don't really want to say right now cuz it's kinda important to the plot...
When's the next chapter
6698224 Soon.
I know I suck, but I'm really sorry the new chapter is not out. So, I sat down, got ready to type and then: Writer's Great Wall Of China struck. That's writer's block times a thousand, basically. So, I'm fresh out of ideas, feel free to suggest some.
I have one idea.
Maybe you can bring Pinkie's family into the story. You could have the parents and Limestone not approve of Cheese because the choosing stone has not decided who Pinkie should marry yet. They did not want Pinkie to set up herself for failure if whoever the stone picks is not Cheese. Maud and Marble support Pinkie being with Cheese. Cheese would try to prove himself worthy to the Pie family so that he can court and marry Pinkie with the family's blessing.
Let me know what you think.
Daww poor cheesie