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OneFluzzyPuppy


"If you want to be the best, you have to do things others aren't willing to do." -Michael Phelps #swimmer Live. Love. Pinkie Pie. #MLP "Move, ball." -Han Solo #starwarstfa "Love it. Do it." -Me

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I'm Cheese Sandwich. And I am going to spend a day with the ponies I left behind when I became a party pony. Whoop-dee-do.

And when you ditched school?

Yes.

Are you gonna tell them you have a crush on Pinkie?

Uh...NO.

Doesn't focus on CheesePie but mentions it.

Yeah, duh, it's right above!

Does it ever shut up?
Also, let me know if the drama tag is excess.

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Time to clear some stuff up!
-InkPen is male and is Cheese's former teacher
-Mrs. LeQuill is his old principal
-Almond Juniper is a bully (same age as Cheese, was held back)
-Skylar is Cheese's younger sister
-Mayonnaise (or Mayo) is Cheese's twin brother
-Marinara is his mom
-Ham is his dad
Did that help?

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It's better to put this sort of info in an Author's Note rather than a comment on the story itself.

Even better than that is to work the info into the narrative itself.

6591729 It was obvious in the story, I mean, I said these things or implied them, but I just felt like I should clarify as a little note.

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