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“Sir! They have discovered Where We Are, what should we do sir?”
“I need you to destroy the plan and quickly use the Escape Route. I know you have a map somewhere of it.”
“Yes sir, I have it right here.”
“Okay then go.”
“But wait one more thing sir”
“What is it?”
It's about the #@@$, I may have discovered something about it, it could have-”
“Explosion.”
*Sound of people into the room.”
“This is the FBI, stop right there!”
*Bang bang bang*
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Author's Note: ______ was never a normal pup to begin with, he was born under strange circumstances. During the harsh unforgiving winter and the eclipse of the Sun. Bringing the whole world into total darkness and despair. From that day he was born, a small defenseless pup. Not knowing what the world would bring to him,
But after a couple hours of being born into the world, his pack was ready to abandon him. Just because he was too weak, too frail, too small, but most of all, it was his appearance. He did not look like his parents or any other dogs they encounter, not even one bit. He did not have the white coat like his mother and nor did he have his father's eyes, he was simply different.
But before he was cast off like any other
pup. The alpha intervene, saving his life before it should have ended. The reason was because, the alpha may have sense something inside of him: Untold wisdom or maybe sheer amount of intelligence. But whatever it was. _____ will soon discover it. For Better or For Worse.
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Title name: _________________.
United as one, United under one Banner, A Paw Chronicle, the story of ( insert name), a dog name ( insert name), reclaiming, United, under strange circumstances, surviving, the Golden Age of Diamond Dogs, Revolution. Viva La Vida,
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Main character names: ________.
Courage, Onyx, Riptide, Oak, Adolph, Eyolf, Wolfgang, Wolfrik, Hoover Pathfinder, Napoleon, Newton.
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Was he human to begin with or not.
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Pick one please.
So here is a preview.
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:Nameless: struggle to light the pile of logs that were pile up together in a circle, his paw were cold and furiously rubbing two sticks together. To make himself prepare for the harsh cold night that were upon him as the last ray of sunlight disappeared over the snow covered mountain tops. I better get this fire started before I could become icicle. :Nameless: thought as he viewed the sun disappearing behind the mountains.
When the sun finally disappeared from his sight and whole the valley was encased in darkness. He turn around, continuing to try to start a fire but with little success on his part.
His knees ache and his paws were sore from rubbing the stick together. His head hurts and his belly growled with hunger. He had not eaten anything for weak and he simply dream for meat.
“I will not give up.” He said to herself as the the pain of hunger grew worse each passing hour. “I will make it through this, and find the antidote for my father.” He kept rubbing the sticks until, there it was, small little flame started to grow.
Yes finally. He started to blow on the flames, making it slightly grow bigger. “Yes yes yes.” He yelled out loud, probably crying tears of excitement. I will not fall. The Adventure was almost over and he would finally go back home.
But then, he heard a loud roar and something making the ground trembled beneath him. Something big was coming and it was coming towards him.
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See, does it sound nice or is it bad. Well I hope one of you people could edit it with me and another could pre-read it before I could publish it. Anyways, it could be much better than other 2 stories I made and one of you people could help me. So PM me, okay goodbye I'll be waiting and please vote for character name should be or the title. But don't forget, comments your submission for the character name or title. But it must be something unique and isn't common. Ok that's all./
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Eyolf.
7082534 but theres also the fact that the u.s builds up reserves of resources. it wouldnt be hard for the u.s to find more of the stuff if its a similar world to ours. in the story its also mentiomed resources were moved around.
this is land of fantasy though and im done debating over a story.
Honestly I enjoy the story so far and I can't wait to see where it goes in the future
Nice story keep it up!:)
You gonna update this or what?
When will it update? It's really interesting!
Ok I would seriously like to express my dissatisfaction that I CANT READ THIS I mean seriously there’s so many grammatical errors I can’t even follow and see the picture correctly in my head!!!
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For God's Sakes. My Man's Been Dead Since July 2019. Can't Fix Shit If He's GONE.
Edit: Although I Totally Agree That It Does Need Work. 😐
Remaking his story, here I go making a realistic and grammatically correct remake-
I made it. Here's the link. It's bad, but I'll do better soon. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/473814/land-of-liberty-general-wells-abandoned-story-remade
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Well, It's not there
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Where?