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Gotta say that this story is one promising clop fic. Didn't expected Celestia and Luna to be that close, but I really enjoyed their interaction with a Big Mac, especially the fact that he's experienced with mares (given his confession about a certain pink mare
, admission of having booty calls, and having the attention of Cherrilee). BTW, I liked Raven Heart, especially the fact that he resembles Sebastian Michaelis. Hope to see more of him. Have a fav and a like.
Oh my... That was pretty hot! Well written and very enjoyable, even if I'm not a big fan of incest-related stories. Oh, and did I saw a reference to Black Butler?
More please.
This is excellent, far better than what I normally see on the site; Well-paced and well-written. I await a second chapter!
That lucky stallion.
6396725 Yes. Yes you did. Eat your heart out, Ciel.
Was that a Black Butler reference I saw . . . ?
Big Mac is so lucky. And I mean extremely lucky. Maud would have wiped the floor with him if boulder tossing wasn't a stallion only event.
And holy hell this story is hot. That Luna and Celestia. Damn.
Woo hoo! Over one thousand views! You guys are the best!
This will certainly be an inspiration to continue and complete the second chapter!
Yay, update.
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Oh my, I might need to set an entire day aside to read it.
I thought that Wilting Lilly was a reference to Helena, the vampire child in Hellsing... but I changed idea with the music box and the creepy stuffed animals
Seven months. Worth the wait.
This chapter was insanely hot with the roleplay, though I do feel curiosity about the secret that Celestia and Luna are guarding. Once again, Raven Feather is an expy of Sebastian Michaelis from Kuroshitsuji, Talon is an expy of that fat guy from LoZOoT from when you infiltrate Zelda's castle, and the teddy bear is probably a reference for Freddy, but I have no idea who Wilting Lily is supposed to represent. Anyway, thanks for the chapter.
6667013 You're very welcome.
As to Wilting Lilly's identity, I will leave you with just this one hint: She is based off a character from a certain horror genre anime. I also left a clue on the plaque on her door, but that's all I'll say.
Talk about a sleep-sex schedule. Geez Mac.
Also, wow, the image of Celestia and Luna in those outfits during that roleplay are a hell of a thing to think about.
Hey! It's morning, I have plenty of time on my hands... ;_;
The 7 months of wahr were worth it. The roleplay thing was very hot as is your writing stile. I am looking forward to the next chapter
I gotta say, I am damn happy to see this story here. I read it originally on Fanfiction.net and had looked for it here when I first joined in hopes of finding more, but didn't. Haven't gone back to Fanfiction.net to check, but now I don't have to. This truly is a beautifully crafted fic. Hardcore sex with the best stallion in the series taking on two of the princesses (and hopefully more if he truly is Champion of the Princesses).
And by the way, great little Black Butler reference there. Raven Feather would make Sebastian proud.
Such a huge chapter, I had to read it over the course of two days. Amazing none the less. Luna's fresh view on otherwise common elements on modern fetishes is so adorable, I half expected Big Mac to scoop her up in a tight hug and gush over how adorable she is... but gushing in her works too.
But beyond the crazy amounts of amazing sexual content, I'm pleasantly surprised by what appears to be a further underlying plot. Who's reading into Big Mac's memories? What does Cadence want? What will save Big Mac from Applejack's wrath? I can only hope it won't take another seven months for you to pump out a chapter, but if so it'll be worth it.
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i swear to christ if you had said his name was walter, i would have lost my shit.
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My avatar agrees. MOAR.
6927289 "Raven Feather, the best damn champion hunter in all of equestria."
Hellsing Ultimate = win.
...sigh, sucks this story will never be updated.
It has been for several years. Please bring this back. It is getting good.
Love to see this continue.