• Member Since 28th Apr, 2012
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Lance Skyes


Once a writer, but now gone. You might see him again one day, though...

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Yeah, this is just for when I want to put something out to the world, but it has nothing to do with Pony Rangers or Mine Little Pony. (Picture is VERY unrelated)

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 14 )

I personally think that story revolving around Derpy finding a fucking magikarp and defeating all of Equestria's evil while riding it could be one of the best stories EVER.

But oh well...................

I just dont know what to think right now....

Having to re-write 6 pages of (serious) work after fucking it all up renders me unable to judge this.... thing.

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Your first line made me laugh so hard...
"Elements of Harmony, Schmelements of Schmarmony... just beat it with a Magikarp, Derpy!"

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I can totally see Derpy making magikcarp shoot a hyper-beam out of its ass.

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*sprints to google docs*

yup discord would do that

(First comment served for this chapter :derpytongue2:)
If Its not much you need to add more to this chapter its to short a bit more details!
Like what was she doing, where she was going, how did this happen! :ajbemused:

This is chaos I have to say...........
What can I say the chaos is hilarious.
:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
But If it's not much (again) add on to make the chapter long.
Or you could have put all this in a chapter!!! :ajsmug:
(the whole story)

Crazy I have to say Crazy! :pinkiecrazy:
Next time a lot longer please man!!!

This is confusining! :rainbowhuh:

At least it's long... (er)

Discord said over 30 words this ain't 25!!! :flutterrage::twilightangry2:

Make the story's longer next time I crave fanfic!

To EVERYONE!!!!!

This is for my ideas that I just can't stretch into 1000 words.
(There are too many of you to respond to individually and I apologize for that.)

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