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Lance Skyes


Once a writer, but now gone. You might see him again one day, though...

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(Takes place four years after the events of Fighting is Magic and five years after the events of season 4.)

(Also inspired by Fighting is Magic: Story Mode (Mane Six Edition) for the premise and Mortal Kombat: Equestria for the execution.)

Twilight Sparkle and her friends have arrived at the fifth annual Equestria Battle Tournament, eager to show off their skills in battle alongside many other ponies and other races from and around Equestria. (Including some combatants who don't hail from anywhere near Equestria.)

However, not everything is as it seems as Princess Celestia mysteriously disappears right before the opening ceremonies. What happened to Princess Celestia? Is this part of a conspiracy? And can the Mane 6 protect a mythical Pokemon from the clutches of a dangerous Pokemon hunter? (And for that matter, what the hay do Pokemon even have to do with all of this?) If the Mane 6 and their friends, new and old, want any answers, there's only one thing they can do at this point. FIGHT!

Rated Teen for fantasy violence and other things like language that might be barely noticeable but will exist.

Chapters (11)
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Comments ( 156 )

Nice start. A bit rushed and flat, but we shall see to the coming chapters.
Faved for future chapters.

Dragon:moustache:

4590598 Thanks for the feedback. I'll try to improve in the later chapters. :pinkiesmile:

4590607
Definitely improved in depth but still has a bit to go.
Sorry about me being a bit nit picky by the way. I was reading high standards as of late.
But I'm already awaiting the next chapter.
Until then hope your feather glides lightly over the pages.

Dragon:moustache:

4590953 Yeah, I understand that feeling and forgive you. :yay:

Don't worry, the next chapter is probably coming in a couple of days. Probably. :trollestia:

4590963
Thank you for your forgiveness my friend. Diaries of a Madman made me a spoiled reader. :twilightblush:
And you're such a damn tease, you know that right?

Dragon:moustache:

4591010 Flash Sentry should do the Johnny Cage splits move! Oh and did Pinkie forget the shape shifting Changelings that were everywhere! And Celestia got her sunbutt kicked man that's gotta hurt!

The story flows well, the scenes are well-detailed, and the battles are intense and exciting. I like where this is going!:pinkiehappy:

I'm curious to see how far you push the crossover tag. Keldeo's already there, but I had a Super Smash Bros. Brawl flashback when Sombra's cloud appeared. Who else could emerge from the shadows?

Also, do you think I made Sombra a little OOC?

I don't think it's possible to make Sombra act OOC - we haven't seen enough of him to really know how he acts. All we know is that he's an evil tyrant, and your Sombra fits that description.

4596090 Well, as you'll see in the next chapter, (which I'm posting in a few minutes) Keldeo isn't going to be the only one holding up the crossover tag. You can read it for yourself once I post the chapter. (And the spoilerific roster I'll post afterwards. :pinkiehappy:)
4592890 I guess she did. :pinkiecrazy:

4603860 Don't feel too bad about it. People get busy, that's all. What you need to do is write a story or two and publish it. That way, you'll get more followers and you might have more people to talk to. :pinkiehappy:
4599849 Thanks. :twilightsmile:

4661953 No, and I'm sure I could see it if the link weren't derped. :derpytongue2:

4661958 Now that's what I call omoshiroi (It looks better when it's written in Japanese. :derpyderp2:)

4662019 Couldn't find any for either of them sorry but I did try.

4662246 Better... but I'm still confused. I guess Michael Jackson songs do that.
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4662295 My first story on it is going to be called Danny Phantom vs The Last Airbender.

4662309 Do you mean normal or Shyamalan The Last Airbender?

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