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AngeredFox

AngeredFox #1 · Jul 8th, 2015 · · · Hell hath no fury, ·

I feel like this story has great potential. Obviously things would have to be explored in much greater detail to explain and justify why Cadence and Twilight would do such out of character things, but I believe it could be very interesting!

AranyaP

AranyaP #2 · Jul 9th, 2015 · · · Hell hath no fury, ·

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Of course. :)
You'll see more as more snippets are added in to be explored, maybe you'll be able to piece together the events and figure out what's going on! :D

4l3x

4l3x #3 · Jul 25th, 2015 · · · Hell hath no fury, ·

The Bastion's Breach bit confused me mainly because clouds could indeed be weaponized in MLPverse, so them not being concerned and putting up a shield or something to stop it seemed weird.

Otherwise yeah this chapter gives Twilight some motive for going crazy, but not much motive for Cadance abandoning Shining Armor.

I always like seeing Twilight go crazy and do really really bad things , so I hope to possibly see more!

AranyaP

AranyaP #4 · Jul 25th, 2015 · · · Hell hath no fury, ·

6242814 Me too! :)

Although there might be some rewriting on the Fall of the Crystal Empire, something didn't quite make sense in the long run. But I'll try to make things make sense and still fun to read. :)

Warsmith keagan