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Manaphy


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Coco Pommel encounters her foalhood crush. However, admitting she loves her will be anything but simple for the anxious Coco. Will she be able to confess to the love of her life?

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I loved it! Plus that image is more than cute!

6146435 Thanks for reading the story. I'm glad you found it enjoyable. :twilightsmile:
And Coco sure is cute! :pinkiesmile:

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No prob it's my pleasure.

It's sweet but it strikes me that 10 years is a long time to Hold onto feelings for someone.
I wonder if they kept in touch via letters or something.

6146496 Thanks for looking at the story. Yeah, ten years is a lot, though I wanted to make the time since they last saw each other long in order to further emphasize how much they cared for each other. Anyway, thanks for commenting as well, and I'll keep trying to do the best I can on my stories. :pinkiesmile:

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Hey, Manaphy

"That's what makes are most recent success the best one we've had in ages."

Our* I believe.

6146593 Oops! Silly typo on my part. Thanks for catching that. I'll go fix that up right now. :twilightsheepish:
And thanks for looking at the story as well. I'll keep on trying my best. :twilightsmile:

Sooo.... is this Mistyco? Cocosty Fly?

6147036 Mistyco has a nice ring to it. :pinkiesmile:
Anyway, thanks for looking at the story. :twilightsmile:

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I really like this story. :rainbowkiss: I don't know why, but I seem to like these short and sweet stories that resolve themselves rather quickly than the more drawn out one that span an adventure. Not saying those are bad in anyway because I'm sure the effort and work put into them make them great, but stories like yours is why I got into reading fanfiction in the first place.

6153666 Thank you. I'm glad you found this story enjoyable. :twilightsmile:

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