It is time for Twilight to make a huge decision in her life. All princesses get a choice whether or not to drink an immortality potion. Does Twilight drink it? If so what will the consequences be?
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I always attack my hair viciously with a brush, regardless of how much it hurts.
That ending though.
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There's one thing I don't get: why did Twilight have to come immediately?
6129444 Gah! That dastardly 'weather' has foiled me again! I shall rectify that asap. On the subject of why she was needed immediately, well there is an expiration date on the potion. I forgot to mention it. If it detracts from the story too much let me know.
6129484 It doesn't necessarily detract from the story, but it's always a good idea to clear up any confusion in the story.
Uh, Twilight? This is a decision that you had absolutely no right to make for them!
Were you not listening to Applejack, Rarity and Fluttershy?! They didn't want to be immortal, for the very reasons that they all stated!
Ooooooo, I foresee a huge, huge amount of fallout from this stupid act!
Like her permanently losing the very friends that she wanted to keep!
Thanks, Shining. Just...thanks a lot. You really gave your sister some really "good" advice there, bud.
(And yeah, I know. Sarcasm doesn't translate well in print.)
6129709 Oh trust me, there is going to be plenty of fallout after this one. It'l make the scene in A Canterlot Wedding look tame.
6130178 That's...kinda what I'm afraid of.
Mainly because I remember that scene only too well.
And really? Yowtch.
Welp, she can't say that she didn't have it coming this time. Nope, she can't.
On another note, I'm Following the story, but I totally and completely forgot to Follow you, as well!
Bad me!
Anyway, consider yourself Followed, my friend.
This is something else. I really like the setup, and the characters are portrayed very well, especially Fluttershy and Rarity. I've heard the concept of Twi becoming immortal before, but I've never seen it done this way. I only have a few complaints, and most of them are minor. Firstly, the grammar is a bit shaky, but it's nothing to severe. Also, even though Pinkie had one line, it still felt a bit OOC for me. My main complaint is the ending. Sure, it's a kind sentiment, and it mirrors Twilight's actions in "The Ticket Master", but it felt to abrupt. I felt that I wanted more story in between. Other than that, it's a solid read, and I'd definitely recommend it to others to read.