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GhostofSandwich


Recently back from the dead; I conquered all of Hell.

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This story is a sequel to Revelations: The Dark Void


Five long years ago, according to Twilight's math, she entered a plane called the Dark Void, a place meant only for the deceased. Each day, she scoured through the multiple books of her dream library, trying her hardest to find anything related to this realm of existence.

Sadly, none of her books have any mention of the place, so she begins to feel that escape is ultimately impossible. Accepting that she is stuck there, she goes to sleep and attempts to dream herself away from this world that she put herself in. For days on end she just sleeps her days away, hoping that one of her dreams will allow her to be free from this realm.

Only some of the dreams show a hint of sunlight; brilliance from somewhere out in the Dark Void.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 99 )

So it begins! Twilight's epic odyssey journey to home! :pinkiehappy: I seriously don't remember how I found your original story in the first place though :rainbowhuh:
But whatever means I did to find it, I don't regret it even one bit :twilightsmile:

I hope for this sequel we get to see Mystica's reaction to being back in Equestria after over a thousand years. Do the rest of the Mane 6 feel resentful towards her due to the fact that Twilight had to sacrifice herself to get Mystica out. Has hers and Celestia's relationship strained over Celly willingly giving up her current student to rescue her favorite student against Mystica's wishes? Hopefully we'll be finding out the answers to these questions while Twilight's finding her own way back to Equestria.

2220416 Yes, I'll be dealing with the happenings back in Equestria.

So glad to see you continuing the story

2220643 So glad to see you continuing reading!

As one story comes to a close, another shall begin.

We can barely withhold our enthusiasm for this fic. Keep up the great work! :pinkiesmile:

Oh this sounds good:rainbowhuh:

2220690 I'm excited for it as well! I only hope it gets as many likes and views as the prequel did.

I like the start :twilightsmile: I'm very much looking forward to what happens next.

As the guy who was sad about Twilight staying in the void, and as a mod for Twilight's Library, I have a message for you. Your story has been accepted to Twilight's Library!

WUV U! :twilightsmile:

2220739 And I'm looking forward to having a good reader! Every view helps my ego more than anyone knows.

2220740 Really? AWESOME!
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I loved the original, but I'm sure I'll love the continuation even better!

Let's see this new adventure- BEGIN

Tanelorn (Into The Void) - Blind Guardian

For every journey, there is a beginning. To get to the light, you must first transverse the darkest dark of night. Though the blackness may seem eternally overwhelming, know that, if you make it, you will be home.

2221201 Beautifully said, my good sir.

2221238 I get philosophical when I get depressed...

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Heh, I actually probably would have added it sometime tonight. I just held off because there weren't any chapters on it last time I looked. :twilightsmile:

Definitely can't wait to see where this heading.

I love this story want MORE.:flutterrage::twilightsmile: Also sorry to do this but

What if it dissapear ed when she left?

Disappeared is miss spelled.

All she could was smile as she looked ahead.

The grammar in this sentence just doesn't read right

Sorry to go Grammar Nazi on you:pinkiesad2::ajsleepy:

I wonder how the world fared without the Element of magic for 5 years. After all Twilight was often pretty integral in saving it from crazy threats.

2222762 Oh no, don't be upset about correcting me. Would've never noticed them without someone up and saying something.

2222889 This question and more answered in the next chapter.

2222363 If all goes well, it tends to head straight into a cannon that fires large cannonballs directly into your feels. If not that, then there should at least be a good story to this one! WARNING: Things plan to get much gorier than the previous.

Very, very well done:twilightsmile:
Please keep writing.:pinkiehappy:

I faved this before reading a single chapter? *tips glasses down* That's an academy record!

(Will dive in later today. Loved the first one and glad that it's continuing, since that ending just beeeegged for a sequel)

A bittersweet chapter that leaves you with conflicting emotions. Well done :pinkiehappy:

Feels.......just take them man. Just take them.:applecry:

2255339 Thank you kindly!

2255364 All your feels are belong to me!

heres a question. is she in her own body? or is she in twilights body?

2255611 Yes, that is a small detail I left out... She's in her own body, since it was kept in the same exact condition by her magic. I'll go more into detail on that later.

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awesome, thank you for clarifying.

:pinkiegasp: So conflicted it is a mix of :pinkiesad2: and:rainbowkiss:. Well done you own my feels now. I hope they taste great. :derpyderp1:

2256359 *Munches on feels* Wat? *Chews feels slowly* Prove it...

Curse you. Curse you for giving me all these feels. :raritycry:

I dunno, though. Something in the beginning of the chapter felt a little off. Maybe it was just me...

Maybe...

2256418 Something seems off?

Don't worry, I feel the same way...

I can't wait to see Spike come running back to the others yelling "She is coming home! Twilight is coming home!" :moustache:

when will more come? ME WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!:twilightangry2:

I really don't like Mystia, it really seems as if Twilight was "second-best". Celestia loves Mystia like a daughter, her friends accept her really easily. Meanwhile, Twilight has been all but forgotten, even though she gave up her life for someone else. I dunno, it just seems like Twiley was raised just to bring back Mystia, even though Twilight has more to lose... :applejackunsure:

I don't know why but it's hard for me to like Mystia. She just came in and replaced Twilight. She's the Element of Magic now, has all of Twilight's friends, is Celestia's most favorite student. Basically, I agree with upper person. ^

love it. pls do update soon :)

MOAR!:flutterrage: please... :fluttercry:

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By later... you make like half-a-year later right? Meaning sometime soon? The Dark Void waits for nopony you know. We eagerly await Twilight's escape attempt.

3153591 Yeah, more like half a century. :pinkiesad2::raritywink:

Anyways, HOPEFULLY I will regain ready access to internet and a laptop as well a writing privacy, then... when my internet accesses... then I have my permission to write.

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AS SUPREME OVERLORD OF THE UNIVERSE, I GRANT YOU THE INTERNET AND A LAPTOP!!! :twilightsmile:

Twilight's in the Dark Void, Mystia's taking Twilight's place. Now that I think about it, can they both exist in the same place?

YYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!

So.... He burned all evil ponies from the world then jumped into the ire himself?

He's just insane?

He's actually completely evil and wasn't misguided?

He just wanted to watch the world burn?

I don't know.

... so she's stuck in a dark void like pocket world created by a mad pony, who surrendered his body up to the flames.:twilightsmile:

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