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Master Titta


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A few typos here and there but overall enjoyable.

So, are these aliens aiming to condition the ponies into being good little bondage pets or something? It would make a takeover much easier, that's for sure.

Shower? What a shame, Applejack is so much cuter when she's sweaty. :rainbowwild:

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Hey, she still got a shower done with something salty afterwards! :rainbowlaugh:

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Speaking of salty, it's a pity nothing got into her mouth...

Hmm. How does Thunderlane fit into this? Are these supposed aliens interested in both genders the same way? Or do they handle them differently, like making the mares be into submissive kinks while the stallions get the opposite treatment?

Hooh, so the machine gave him a spanking! Not sure if they intend to implant that as a fetish, but it seems likely for now.

On top of that, they appear to work off of Thunderlane's lust for Rainbow. And it's only part one here. Are these extra-equestrial shippers..? What are their ultimate plans? Do they want to outfit Thunderlane with a bondage pet of his own?

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Are these extra-equestrial shippers..?

Nope, they just picked up and put Dash and Thunderlane together by pure accident.

So they really do appear to condition Rainbow to enjoy being helpless. Thunderlane didn't have the same focus on the fact that he was tied down, after all. And Rainbow Dash's reaction grows stronger every time.

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Well, maybe they have other ideas in mind, considered how Dash feels at the end...

>"Ugh... I feel awful, and something kciks in my bell. I need to get checked out."
-Some mighty errors in this sentence.

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>Cum inflaton inbound.
-Huhhh... Did the author forgot to remove his footnote or something ?

Oh few the bimbofication was temporary, I have nothing wrong with a ray that makes them hornier but when it turns them into... "that" I just find it more annoying than sexy.

The voice is getting more personal. Or is that just my imagination?

6088338 What is tubechop? You mean youtube, right?

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Like you would read it in Greek:

Σαυρασεζυαικαιππομαχία

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Yes, it's getting more personal indeed.

Something tells me these "experiments" are aimed to find out how the aliens can best get their rocks off.

So, it's pregnant Rubber Dash now.

What the heck are they after?

Dude this clop though. I would imagine that the pony Dash is thinking of would actually be Fluttershy or Applejack (I don't know who else is in love with her)
Great story though even when it took me a lot of courage just to read this.

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Dude this clop though. I would imagine that the pony Dash is thinking of would actually be Fluttershy or Applejack (I don't know who else is in love with her)

Well, can't Dash be straight?

despite the knee-lenght shorts
suspense alone made hard for Dash
once her breath slowed down

1. Length.
2. Made it hard for Dash.
3. Breathing.

Is the cover pic a crop? If so, do you mind me asking where I could find the full pic?

What ever happened to Trixie? Can you possibly do a follow up chapter for her and her... Gelded tool?

Do you have a pot of coffee? "
" Yes sir . Sixteen ponitas . "
"How much for seven tamales ? "
" Twenty ponitas . "
" Twenty-eight habits ? "
" Thank you sir ! Have a nice day! "
"Thank you!"

her eyes widening and her heart beating a little faster,

telescope for doing the same thing that Dash was doing with her naked eyes.

She said, which made Dash sigh, annoyed by the precision made by Twilight,

We are unarmed and we have ginger,

Dash nodded at the explanation, before turning around again, towards where the approaching spaceship was.

dark green light that blinked two times.

as she dropped the fan with a very light crinkle.

Rainbow Dash felt her heart fill with anguish at the news.

I'm stumped in what to do in this case,

to use my body as a sex toy!"

rapidly understanding what was causing it, Rainbow Dash tried to outrun whatever device of abduction the aliens were using for bringing her inside their spaceship.

Dash was at the balusters

was some something cold painfully grabbing

even if with her limbs separated

nothing at all in the room.

before sighing and waiting

by the means of getting aroused.

company being the cold breeze

"That isn't completely right... shouldn't the idea of being assfucked violently be enough to scare me? Also, why do I feel wet?" Dash thought,

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