So, are these aliens aiming to condition the ponies into being good little bondage pets or something? It would make a takeover much easier, that's for sure.
Dude this clop though. I would imagine that the pony Dash is thinking of would actually be Fluttershy or Applejack (I don't know who else is in love with her) Great story though even when it took me a lot of courage just to read this.
Is it suppose to link to tubechop?
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Yes it is supposed to.
A few typos here and there but overall enjoyable.
So, are these aliens aiming to condition the ponies into being good little bondage pets or something? It would make a takeover much easier, that's for sure.
Dude this clop though. I would imagine that the pony Dash is thinking of would actually be Fluttershy or Applejack (I don't know who else is in love with her)
Great story though even when it took me a lot of courage just to read this.
despite the knee-lenght shorts
suspense alone made hard for Dash
once her breath slowed down
1. Length.
2. Made it hard for Dash.
3. Breathing.
Three words:
Get. An. Editor.